[COMPLETE] A Mating in the Wilds by Ottwell Binns - kd

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Chapter 11 is ready for review.
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Chapter 10 (edited) PL OK

Chapter 11 PL OK Both marked so in MW
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Chapter 12 is ready for review.
"Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter." (Martin Luther King Jr.)
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Chapter 12 PL OK Marked so in MW

You were right when you said this is a good story! I'm glad you found it :D
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Chapter 13 is ready for review.
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Chapter 13 PL OK Marked so in MW
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Chapter 14 is ready for review.
"Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter." (Martin Luther King Jr.)
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Section 14 PL Notes

@5:08 I hear 'Why' where text reads 'What' in phrase

"What need?" interrupted the girl.
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Corrected file for Chapter 14 has ben uploaded.
Thanks for catching that error.
Richard
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Chapter 15 is ready for review.
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Chapter 16 is ready for review.
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Chapter 14 (edited) PL OK
Chapters 15 and 16 PL OK All marked so in MW
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Chapter 17 is ready for review.
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Section 17 PL Notes

@ 18:59 omitted 'though' from phrase

knowing that though he spoke lightly, he had little hope of escape.
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Corrected file for chapter 17 has been uploaded.

Thanks for finding that error.

Richard
"Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter." (Martin Luther King Jr.)
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