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Penumbra
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by Penumbra » April 25th, 2017, 9:15 am
Roger wrote: Chapter 20 has been posted.
Thanks!
Two very minor points:
00:34 "accomplishment" is singular in the text but I heard "accomplishment
s "
07:54 I heard "that
the gentleman" but expected "that
that gentleman"
I'm ready for Sarah Ann's comeuppance.
Tom Penn
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by Roger » April 26th, 2017, 9:53 am
True, they were minor discrepancies, but have been corrected. We probably could have let them go, but best to be as accurate as possible.
Thanks for pointing them out.
20 has been patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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by Penumbra » April 26th, 2017, 12:37 pm
Roger wrote: True, they were minor discrepancies, but have been corrected. We probably could have let them go, but best to be as accurate as possible.
Thanks for pointing them out.
20 has been patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks!
Section 20 is PL OK!
Tom Penn
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by Roger » April 28th, 2017, 7:19 am
Chapter 21 has been posted.
Thanks!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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by Penumbra » April 28th, 2017, 12:28 pm
Roger wrote: Chapter 21 has been posted.
Thanks!
Once again, nicely read. Two items:
03:49 I heard "strong" and expected "strongly"
06:44 I heard "being just a man" and expected "being a just man"
Tom Penn
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by Roger » April 29th, 2017, 6:02 am
More good catches. Nice going!
21 has been patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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by Penumbra » April 29th, 2017, 8:05 am
Roger wrote: More good catches. Nice going!
21 has been patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks!
Chapter 21 is PL OK!
Well read and well patched.
Tom Penn
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by Roger » April 29th, 2017, 12:58 pm
Thank you for that.
Chapter 22 has also been posted. It falls under the category of .... "uh-oh".
Thanks!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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by Penumbra » April 29th, 2017, 1:51 pm
Roger wrote: Thank you for that.
Chapter 22 has also been posted. It falls under the category of .... "uh-oh".
Thanks!
Chapter 22 is PL OK!
Well done!
By coincidence, in my solo book there is also an honorable young man who is suspected of being a thief by some of his family members.
Tom Penn
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by Roger » May 1st, 2017, 9:39 am
What a coincidence indeed! I hope your honorable character doesn't run into similar problems as mine, as in:
Chapter 23 has been posted.
Thanks!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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by Penumbra » May 1st, 2017, 1:50 pm
Roger wrote: What a coincidence indeed! I hope your honorable character doesn't run into similar problems as mine, as in:
Chapter 23 has been posted.
Thanks!
Flawless!
Chapter 23 is PL OK!
Tom Penn
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by Roger » May 3rd, 2017, 7:32 am
A brief, yet interesting chapter 24 has been posted.
Thanks!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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by Penumbra » May 3rd, 2017, 8:53 am
Roger wrote: A brief, yet interesting chapter 24 has been posted.
Thanks!
A single, but significant, item:
01:45 I heard "forgotten" and expected "forgiven"
Tom Penn
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by Roger » May 4th, 2017, 6:28 am
Another good catch!
Chapter 24 has been patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks!!
-- Roger .... pushing on the door of life marked "pull"
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by Penumbra » May 4th, 2017, 10:31 am
Roger wrote: Another good catch!
Chapter 24 has been patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks!!
Chapter 24 is PL OK!
Tom Penn