ah, a new chapter is ready.
Well done Tom, although this part was hard to swallow, Adam's tirade is so full of sexism
I never remembered it was that awful !
I did not find many errors, all in all it was perfectly narrated. Here only a few notes:
> at 0:01
: "Livre Dix
" - you say "di", but the number especially when it stands alone is pronounced "diss
> at 3:18
: "ces furies dévasta
trices": you say "dévas-trices" instead of "dévas-ta
> at 6:40
: "quelles seraient celles d'entre elles
": you say "eux
> at 11:37
: "tout ce
que je mange, ou bois" - you forgot "ce
> at 20:37
: "tout le blâme dûment retombé
": I see what you mean in your note and you don't have to correct it, but I just wanted to note that "retombé" is not grammatically wrong in this sentence as it has more of an adjectival function here, or a past tense, without mentioning the verb "être", which is ok. But if yours is closer to the original, it's probably ok to leave it as well. There's not much of a difference in nuance anyway and it could well be a typo.
> at 34:56
: "choisissons le
plus court" - I hear "la
We're almost at the end !!!! 3 more sections. Or do you think section 12 will be divided in two parts again ?