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Post Posted:: January 26th, 2015, 6:30 am 

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Hi Barbara,

Yes, I think it's good--still waiting for the political candidates to show up though. I might need to write my own summary to reflect the focus on the women characters.

I've adjusted the level as per your suggestion. Thanks for the feedback.

Cheers, Kirsty


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Post Posted:: January 28th, 2015, 1:53 am 

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Chapter 5 is fine now Kirsty!

Best,

Barbara


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Post Posted:: February 4th, 2015, 12:50 am 

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Hi Barbara,

Thanks for confirming that Chapter 5 is okay.

I've just uploaded Chapter 6.

Cheers, Kirsty


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Post Posted:: February 4th, 2015, 1:54 am 

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Thanks for Chapter 6 Kirsty. It's PL OK. I loved Grandma Clay's love story.


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Post Posted:: February 26th, 2015, 7:52 pm 

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Hi Barbara,

Sorry for the delay in getting the next chapter to you; I've just uploaded it now.

Cheers, Kirsty


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Post Posted:: February 26th, 2015, 9:37 pm 

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kirstyl wrote:
Hi Barbara,

Sorry for the delay in getting the next chapter to you; I've just uploaded it now.

Cheers, Kirsty



PL OK Kirsty. This Ernest Breslaw is a nice twist in the plot. I wonder if the narrator's match-making, like JA's Emma's, is going to turn out misguided? Maybe she herself is the object of Ernest's affections?

I await Chapter 8.

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Barbara


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Post Posted:: February 26th, 2015, 9:44 pm 

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Hi Barbara,

Chapter 8 should be there now too. It's just a short one.

I think our heroine is a fair bit older; although, I've noticed in these early novels what counts as old is a lot younger than we understand today. Will wait and see!

Kirsty


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Post Posted:: March 2nd, 2015, 4:45 am 

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Chapter 9 is ready for PL :)


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Post Posted:: March 2nd, 2015, 6:36 pm 

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kirstyl wrote:
Hi Barbara,

Chapter 8 should be there now too. It's just a short one.

I think our heroine is a fair bit older; although, I've noticed in these early novels what counts as old is a lot younger than we understand today. Will wait and see!


Oh, "grey hair". Perhaps she had a disastrous marriage then. I like the way more characters are being introduced.

At 1:36, Kirsty, you left out a short sentence "Give her plenty of air".

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Barbara


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Post Posted:: March 2nd, 2015, 6:38 pm 

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kirstyl wrote:
Chapter 9 is ready for PL :)


Chapter 9 is perfect!

Best,

Barbara


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Post Posted:: March 5th, 2015, 9:51 pm 

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Hi Barbara,

I've added the missing sentence to Chapter 8. Hope it's all okay now. :)
Kirsty


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Post Posted:: March 6th, 2015, 2:24 am 

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Just uploaded Chapter 10! It's very funny--I think she got a lucky escape with the first dentist!


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Post Posted:: March 6th, 2015, 3:51 am 

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kirstyl wrote:
Just uploaded Chapter 10! It's very funny--I think she got a lucky escape with the first dentist!


I don't want to think about it.

So, looks as if those political candidates are about to enter the scene.

BTW, PL OK!


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Post Posted:: April 6th, 2015, 7:44 pm 

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Hi Barbara,

Another long break, I'm sorry...

But now, here are a couple of chapters done :)

Kirsty


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Post Posted:: April 9th, 2015, 3:56 pm 

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kirstyl wrote:
Hi Barbara,

Another long break, I'm sorry...

But now, here are a couple of chapters done :)

Kirsty



Thanks Kirsty.

Is Grandma being so admirably honest but so tough on Andrew because fear still lingers in Australian society about the convict taint? And is Dawn going to stop tormenting poor Ernest?

Looking forward to learning more.

BTW Mp3gain suggests that chapter 12 could do with a gain of 1.5. See what you think. I've marked it PL OK.

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Barbara


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