COMPLETE: The Charwoman's Shadow, by Lord Dunsany -jo

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 1st, 2022, 1:54 pm

pamlflaherty wrote: ↑December 1st, 2022, 1:33 pm PL CH 19 O.K.
Small, but at 14:48 "The priest went sometimes down to the church in Aragona, but dwelt mostly alone...
You leave our the word "alone." Pam

Aha, I was just dabbling a bit with the tempo, so now "alone" can be found at 15:02. "Dwelt mostly in his house" never did make much sense! Doesn't everybody?

20 coming soon.

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 2nd, 2022, 2:40 pm

20 is uploaded. Ting!

pamlflaherty · Post by **pamlflaherty** » December 3rd, 2022, 5:37 pm

CH 19 Spot PL good
CH 20 PL Good-building suspense!
One word, you decide
In Title of Chapter 20, :16 "A" Way of the Gods...
You say "the" way of the Gods...

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 3rd, 2022, 6:17 pm

20 repaired, ready for spot PL.

21 is uploaded. Dunsany reveals another use for Holy Water, and that there is a Kingdom of Shadows. where we have to follow our shadiws around!

pamlflaherty · Post by **pamlflaherty** » December 4th, 2022, 12:20 pm

I'll do 20 Spot PL and 21 today Looks like Librivox down for two days starting early tomorrow so guessing no zoom meeting--Pam PS Kingdom of Shadows-how cool--you are right this metaphor his amazing

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 4th, 2022, 12:36 pm

pamlflaherty wrote: ↑December 4th, 2022, 12:20 pm I'll do 20 Spot PL and 21 today Looks like Librivox down for two days starting early tomorrow so guessing no zoom meeting--Pam PS Kingdom of Shadows-how cool--you are right this metaphor his amazing

Yes, if you look at the Announcement and Discussion Threads you will see the date has been changed to next Monday, the 12th. You should be subscribed to both. If you aren't getting notices, unsubscribe then resubscribe. Sometimes the link breaks for me too.

pamlflaherty · Post by **pamlflaherty** » December 4th, 2022, 12:48 pm

Spot PL CH 20 Good, CH 21 PL excellent!
What is the main page I go to to find zoom announcements-? I have struggled to see where meeting is moved to 12th-9am EST?-Pam

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 4th, 2022, 1:04 pm

pamlflaherty wrote: ↑December 4th, 2022, 12:48 pm Spot PL CH 20 Good, CH 21 PL excellent!
What is the main page I go to to find zoom announcements-? I have struggled to see where meeting is moved to 12th-9am EST?-Pam

I see you found it, so I answered your query over there.

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 4th, 2022, 1:55 pm

22 is uploaded. Get ready for thrust and parry, and dispair!

While we're shut down I'll be recording more chapters.

pamlflaherty · Post by **pamlflaherty** » December 4th, 2022, 6:37 pm

O.K. Just saw this-leaving for evening-wont get to it till LIbrivox is back on Looking forward to more chapters! Pam

pamlflaherty · Post by **pamlflaherty** » December 7th, 2022, 6:08 pm

CH22 PL O.K.
Again one small thing: 11:33 And now he was near the door and the master...still a dark "lithe" shape you say a dark "little" shape ..Great reading!

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 7th, 2022, 9:10 pm

22 is repaired. The file was shorter than the time cited, so I had to hunt a bit to find the "lithe" mistake. It was at 8:06.

23, coming up shortly.

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 7th, 2022, 10:17 pm

23 is uploaded. When your soul is in peril, persevere!

pamlflaherty · Post by **pamlflaherty** » December 10th, 2022, 6:48 pm

Ch 22 Spot PL Good
CH 23-Pl really good! about as perfect as possible! Great. I really see the amazing forever shadow metaphor-they should teach this in creative writing-

msfry · Post by **msfry** » December 18th, 2022, 9:14 am

Chapter 24 is finally uploaded.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/charwomansshadow_24_123kb.mp3 18:42

Ting Yung Han!