[COMPLETE] Masters of the Vortex by E.E. Smith-ans

[barleyguy]

PL OK!

Thanks.

Chapter 10 is Ready for PL.

This is a short one, introducing a new character. We're over halfway.

Cheers,

Harley.

[KevinS]

PL OK!

Thanks.

Chapter 10 is Ready for PL.

This is a short one, introducing a new character. We're over halfway.

Cheers,

Harley.

PL OK!

I didn't understand any of it.

[barleyguy]

PL OK!

Thanks.

Chapter 10 is Ready for PL.

This is a short one, introducing a new character. We're over halfway.

Cheers,

Harley.

PL OK!

I didn't understand any of it.

Assuming it wasn't me, I can understand how this chapter would be difficult to understand without any context from the rest of the book. Sigma curves and flitters and duodec and response times of imaginary aliens.

[KevinS]

Thanks.

Chapter 10 is Ready for PL.

This is a short one, introducing a new character. We're over halfway.

Cheers,

Harley.

PL OK!

I didn't understand any of it.

Assuming it wasn't me, I can understand how this chapter would be difficult to understand without any context from the rest of the book. Sigma curves and flitters and duodec and response times of imaginary aliens.

Oh no, it wasn't you. I should have listened more closely in my physics class!

[barleyguy]

Hi. Chapter 11 is ready for PL.

Possibly another brain melter.

[KevinS]

Hi. Chapter 11 is ready for PL.

Possibly another brain melter.

A little racy for me.

PL OK!

[barleyguy]

Hi. Just a quick update... I'm RV camping, last week and this week. Heading home tomorrow. I'll do my next upload in the next few days, and then get rolling again.

(I could theoretically record in my RV, and will definitely do that if I go on a longer trip. But on short trips it seems like time just flies by.)

[KevinS]

Hi. Just a quick update... I'm RV camping, last week and this week. Heading home tomorrow. I'll do my next upload in the next few days, and then get rolling again.

(I could theoretically record in my RV, and will definitely do that if I go on a longer trip. But on short trips it seems like time just flies by.)

Thank you for the update. Take your time and enjoy the camping!

[barleyguy]

Hi. Chapter 12 is ready for PL.

This is a pretty short one; Vesta is telling a story in an alien language. Might be the raciest one yet though.

Cheers,

Harley.

[KevinS]

Hi. Chapter 12 is ready for PL.

This is a pretty short one; Vesta is telling a story in an alien language. Might be the raciest one yet though.

Cheers,

Harley.

PL OK!

[barleyguy]

PL OK!

Thanks. Chapter 13 is ready for PL.

[KevinS]

PL OK!

Thanks. Chapter 13 is ready for PL.

Sort of a blah chapter, I thought.

Is that a glitch at 5:14?

[barleyguy]

PL OK!

Thanks. Chapter 13 is ready for PL.

Sort of a blah chapter, I thought.

Is that a glitch at 5:14?

I don't think it is. I listened back, and I think it matches the text, which reads

"Particularly the stuff—and especially the liquid stuff!"

I did laugh a little in that part, but I think it matches the character.

Do you think it needs a change?

Thanks,

Harley.

[KevinS]

Thanks. Chapter 13 is ready for PL.

Sort of a blah chapter, I thought.

Is that a glitch at 5:14?

I don't think it is. I listened back, and I think it matches the text, which reads

"Particularly the stuff—and especially the liquid stuff!"

I did laugh a little in that part, but I think it matches the character.

Do you think it needs a change?

Thanks,

Harley.

No, it's fine. (I'm not sure how I would read it. It's just a little awkward.)

PL OK!

[KevinS]

When I said the chapter was 'blah,' I didn't mean your reading. The text itself is a little tedious with the card playing, that's all.