[Complete] Hauntings by Vernon Lee - lt

Post by **brownrottger** » August 17th, 2022, 3:42 pm

Section 1 is now PL Ok!
Christine

Post by **brownrottger** » August 19th, 2022, 10:17 am

Bravo! Bravo! Excellent dramatization. This story reminds me of Poe.
Section 2 notes:
12:32 shorten unnatural silence within sentence. "I've heard physiologists -- allude to such things"
12:47 remove repeat of "which grow"
Thanks!
Christine

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » August 19th, 2022, 2:08 pm

brownrottger wrote: ↑August 19th, 2022, 10:17 am Bravo! Bravo! Excellent dramatization. This story reminds me of Poe.
Section 2 notes:
12:32 shorten unnatural silence within sentence. "I've heard physiologists -- allude to such things"
12:47 remove repeat of "which grow"
Thanks!
Christine

These should be fixed now. Btw, the time code on the second one was actually 20:47 but I was able to find it.

Post by **brownrottger** » August 19th, 2022, 3:22 pm

flavo5000 wrote: ↑August 19th, 2022, 2:08 pm
brownrottger wrote: ↑August 19th, 2022, 10:17 am Bravo! Bravo! Excellent dramatization. This story reminds me of Poe.
Section 2 notes:
12:32 shorten unnatural silence within sentence. "I've heard physiologists -- allude to such things"
12:47 remove repeat of "which grow"
Thanks!
Christine
These should be fixed now. Btw, the time code on the second one was actually 20:47 but I was able to find it.

Oh, sorry about that.

Post by **brownrottger** » August 19th, 2022, 3:24 pm

Section 2 is now PL Ok!

Post by **brownrottger** » August 20th, 2022, 10:23 am

Section 3 notes:
1:58 shorten unnatural silence; currently 3 seconds.
12:07 should be "August 6, 1882"; I heard "August 16, 1882"
12:08 remove sniff sound
22:15 remove repeat "The elder school girls have to be kept under lock and key"
Thanks!
Christine

Post by **brownrottger** » August 20th, 2022, 12:38 pm

Section 4 is PL Ok!
Christine

Post by **brownrottger** » August 21st, 2022, 10:15 am

Section 5 notes:
3:08 remove word in error "not"; should be "so as to bring out the silhouette"
23:05 shorten unnatural silence
24:22 should be "by comparing it"; I heard "by compacting it"
26:17 remove repeat " I cannot say(whistle, sniff)"
28:39 remove repeat and error "to suppress and shock"
Thanks!
Christine

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » August 21st, 2022, 1:35 pm

brownrottger wrote: ↑August 21st, 2022, 10:15 am Section 5 notes:
3:08 remove word in error "not"; should be "so as to bring out the silhouette"
23:05 shorten unnatural silence
24:22 should be "by comparing it"; I heard "by compacting it"
26:17 remove repeat " I cannot say(whistle, sniff)"
28:39 remove repeat and error "to suppress and shock"
Thanks!
Christine

Sections 3 & 5 should be fixed now. You can always tell the tracks I edit while my kids are running around being noisy. I miss the really obvious stuff sometimes.

Post by **brownrottger** » August 21st, 2022, 2:12 pm

Section 6, just one note:
13:03 should be "the songs were graceful"; I heard "the songs were grateful"
Thanks!
Christine

Post by **brownrottger** » August 21st, 2022, 2:20 pm

Sections 3 and 5 are now PL Ok!
Christine

Post by **brownrottger** » August 22nd, 2022, 10:24 am

Section 7:
3:30 should be "more genuinely old-world"; I heard "more genuinely old worn"
optional: 44:25 should be "That is the end of the story"; I heard "This is the end of the story"

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » August 22nd, 2022, 11:21 am

brownrottger wrote: ↑August 22nd, 2022, 10:24 am Section 7:
3:30 should be "more genuinely old-world"; I heard "more genuinely old worn"
optional: 44:25 should be "That is the end of the story"; I heard "This is the end of the story"

Sections 6 & 7 should be fixed and Section 8 is ready for PL!

Post by **brownrottger** » August 22nd, 2022, 3:14 pm

Sections 6&7 are PL Ok. Section 8 is in line on my list for PL.

Post by **brownrottger** » August 23rd, 2022, 4:40 pm

Section 8, just two notes:
14:23 missing word "were"; should be "possessed imperial fiefs and were princes"
51:11 should be "smoking against the blue sky"; I heard "smoking against the black sky"
Thanks!
Christine