COMPLETE: Bee and Butterfly, A Tale of Two Cousins by Lucy Foster Madison - jo

Nammy · Post by **Nammy** » July 6th, 2022, 3:19 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_01_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 15:59

Carol/Nammy

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » July 6th, 2022, 5:48 pm

The Forward is PL OK.

Thanks,

M

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » July 6th, 2022, 6:55 pm

Nammy wrote: ↑July 6th, 2022, 3:19 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_01_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 15:59

Carol/Nammy

Great job. I like all the emotion you put into it, especially, the shivery "oh" from the girl who didn't like bugs. Looking forward to continuing the story.

Chapter 1 is PL OK.

M

Nammy · Post by **Nammy** » July 7th, 2022, 6:14 pm

Thank you! I love the dramatics! That's why it takes me so long to get it just right. I need to pre-read it so I know when to put the emotions in it. My biggest problem is the pronunciation of words that I never heard of before. However, I'm working that out.

Hope to have another chapter possibly tonight.

Carol/Nammy

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » July 7th, 2022, 8:01 pm

So glad to see that you've got this solo underway, Carol.
And, you are in good hands with your DPL - one of the best.

I admire the way you've taken on all of the LibriVox challenges.

Nammy · Post by **Nammy** » July 8th, 2022, 2:35 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_02_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 14:26

Carol/Nammy

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » July 9th, 2022, 1:32 pm

Nammy wrote: ↑July 8th, 2022, 2:35 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_02_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 14:26

Carol/Nammy

And, this is another PL OK.

M

Nammy · Post by **Nammy** » July 9th, 2022, 11:21 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_03_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 13:43

Carol/Nammy

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » July 11th, 2022, 3:37 pm

Nammy wrote: ↑July 9th, 2022, 11:21 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_03_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 13:43

Carol/Nammy

PL OK. You are doing a great job with this.

M

Nammy · Post by **Nammy** » July 11th, 2022, 10:42 pm

Thank you. Just wait until you get the next one!

Carol/Nammy

Nammy · Post by **Nammy** » July 11th, 2022, 11:55 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_04_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 18:32

Carol/Nammy

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » July 13th, 2022, 2:33 pm

Nammy wrote: ↑July 11th, 2022, 11:55 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_04_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 18:32

Carol/Nammy

Poor Bee.

One comment on this chapter.
At about 16:25 sounds like a slight stumble/extra word between "that" and "it" in "thinking that it was his daughter."

You are making me want to read one of my favorite childhood books.

M

Nammy · Post by **Nammy** » July 13th, 2022, 6:15 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_04_madison_128kb.mp3 (Revised)

Time -- 18:32

Boy, that was a tough one to find! I never would have caught that on my own. Then how to fix it? I knew I'd have to do the whole sequence again to get the emotion right. However, after listening intently, I figured out where the extra word was and took a chance on deleting it. I think it worked! *WHEW*

The next section will be coming soon. This is a good book and makes me want to keep going to see if poor Bee ever gets accepted. A lot of us, including me, can relate to her in one sense or another. This is a story that stands the test of time. So glad I found it!

Thanks!

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » July 14th, 2022, 9:30 am

Nammy wrote: ↑July 13th, 2022, 6:15 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_04_madison_128kb.mp3 (Revised)

Time -- 18:32

Boy, that was a tough one to find! I never would have caught that on my own. Then how to fix it? I knew I'd have to do the whole sequence again to get the emotion right. However, after listening intently, I figured out where the extra word was and took a chance on deleting it. I think it worked! *WHEW*

The next section will be coming soon. This is a good book and makes me want to keep going to see if poor Bee ever gets accepted. A lot of us, including me, can relate to her in one sense or another. This is a story that stands the test of time. So glad I found it!

Thanks!

I'm glad you found it too and that you let me be your DPL.

You did an excellent job with the editing. It is now PL OK.

Nammy · Post by **Nammy** » July 14th, 2022, 5:19 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/beeandbutterfly_05_madison_128kb.mp3

Time -- 15:31

Carol/Nammy