COMPLETE: Angelica by Elisabeth Sanxay Holding - jo

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 11th, 2022, 5:10 pm

Section 19 & 20 are ready for PL

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » May 12th, 2022, 6:44 am

kristakz wrote: ↑May 11th, 2022, 5:10 pm Section 19 & 20 are ready for PL

Both sections are PL Okay

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 13th, 2022, 1:28 pm

Section 21 is ready for PL

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » May 14th, 2022, 4:48 am

kristakz wrote: ↑May 13th, 2022, 1:28 pm Section 21 is ready for PL

PL Okay

Way to bury the lead, Angelica: Oh, did I forget to tell you who the father is?

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 14th, 2022, 6:52 am

JHedrick wrote: ↑May 14th, 2022, 4:48 am
kristakz wrote: ↑May 13th, 2022, 1:28 pm Section 21 is ready for PL
PL Okay

Way to bury the lead, Angelica: Oh, did I forget to tell you who the father is?

LOL. I'm really not sure I like this girl. I read one review of this book which basically said "Holding wasn't even a bit trying to be nice to her characters"

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 15th, 2022, 9:15 am

Sections 22 & 23 are ready for PL

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » May 16th, 2022, 9:55 am

kristakz wrote: ↑May 15th, 2022, 9:15 am Sections 22 & 23 are ready for PL

Well done!

Both PL Okay

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 20th, 2022, 7:31 pm

Sections 24 & 25 are ready for PL

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » May 21st, 2022, 6:34 am

kristakz wrote: ↑May 20th, 2022, 7:31 pm Sections 24 & 25 are ready for PL

A little less drama than previous chapters. PL Okay for both

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 28th, 2022, 7:20 pm

Section 26 is ready for PL

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » May 29th, 2022, 7:38 am

kristakz wrote: ↑May 28th, 2022, 7:20 pm Section 26 is ready for PL

PL Okay.

Just a few more to go

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 29th, 2022, 1:37 pm

JHedrick wrote: ↑May 29th, 2022, 7:38 am
kristakz wrote: ↑May 28th, 2022, 7:20 pm Section 26 is ready for PL
PL Okay.

Just a few more to go

Indeed, almost done.
Sections 17 & 28 are ready for PL at your convenience.

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » May 29th, 2022, 4:20 pm

§27 is PL Okay

§28 - the intro seems a bit ad lib.
At 17:17 there is a missing sentence: "Hasn't this long, weary parting been just an interlude? "

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 29th, 2022, 7:29 pm

JHedrick wrote: ↑May 29th, 2022, 4:20 pm §27 is PL Okay

§28 - the intro seems a bit ad lib.
At 17:17 there is a missing sentence: "Hasn't this long, weary parting been just an interlude? "

"a bit ad lib"

Indeed, my brain must have shut off both when I recorded that and when I proofed it

Fixed now, and the missing line added. Length is 19:55

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » May 29th, 2022, 8:39 pm

Some synapses took off to the beach for the long weekend is my guess

All good now