[COMPLETE] A Dozen Short Stories by H. G. Wells - availle

Post by **brownrottger** » May 8th, 2022, 10:04 am

kristakz wrote: ↑May 8th, 2022, 6:48 am
brownrottger wrote: ↑May 7th, 2022, 5:37 pm Section 1 : just one note.
9:37 should be "'Again precisely', said Ganpat"; I heard "'Again precisely', said Gabita"
Section 2 PL Ok!
Oops. All fixed. And I cleared out a click right before that sentence, too.

And thank you very much for stepping in as DPL

You're welcome. Section 1 is PL Ok!
Christine

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 11th, 2022, 5:30 pm

Section 3 is ready for PL

Post by **brownrottger** » May 12th, 2022, 9:28 am

kristakz wrote: ↑May 11th, 2022, 5:30 pm Section 3 is ready for PL

Section 3 is PL Ok!
Christine

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » May 26th, 2022, 2:30 pm

Section 4 is ready for PL

Post by **brownrottger** » May 26th, 2022, 4:19 pm

kristakz wrote: ↑May 26th, 2022, 2:30 pm Section 4 is ready for PL

Ok, in line for PL

Post by **brownrottger** » May 26th, 2022, 6:36 pm

kristakz wrote: ↑May 26th, 2022, 2:30 pm Section 4 is ready for PL

Section 4 is PL Ok!

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » June 9th, 2022, 8:50 pm

Stories 5 & 6 are ready for PL

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » June 10th, 2022, 5:30 pm

Sections 7 & 8 are ready for PL

Post by **brownrottger** » June 10th, 2022, 6:33 pm

Section 5 is PL Ok! Section 6 just one note:
6:44 remove repeat of "was not worth half a man"

Thanks!
Christine

Post by **brownrottger** » June 11th, 2022, 7:02 am

Section 7 & 8 are PL Ok!
Thanks!
Christine

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » June 11th, 2022, 10:17 am

brownrottger wrote: ↑June 10th, 2022, 6:33 pm Section 5 is PL Ok! Section 6 just one note:
6:44 remove repeat of "was not worth half a man"

Thanks!
Christine

Actually, I would like to leave that in. Here is the text:
"that Azim Khan was not worth a half anna, not worth a half anna to any human soul."

I did make a change to tweak it a bit, to make it sound less like a copy of the line (tried to change the emphasis a bit the second time). So can you have another listen from about 6:42 to 6:48 and let me know what you think? Thanks.

Post by **brownrottger** » June 11th, 2022, 11:32 am

kristakz wrote: ↑June 11th, 2022, 10:17 am
brownrottger wrote: ↑June 10th, 2022, 6:33 pm Section 5 is PL Ok! Section 6 just one note:
6:44 remove repeat of "was not worth half a man"

Thanks!
Christine
Actually, I would like to leave that in. Here is the text:
"that Azim Khan was not worth a half anna, not worth a half anna to any human soul."

I did make a change to tweak it a bit, to make it sound less like a copy of the line (tried to change the emphasis a bit the second time). So can you have another listen from about 6:42 to 6:48 and let me know what you think? Thanks.

Yes Section 6 is PL ok!
Christine

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » June 15th, 2022, 7:15 pm

Section 10 is ready for PL

Post by **brownrottger** » June 17th, 2022, 12:32 pm

Section 10:
Just one note:
22:49 should by "by the solvency of me and mother"; I heard "by the advocacy of me and mother"
Thanks!
Christine

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » June 19th, 2022, 7:59 pm

Section 10 is ready for spot PL

And section 11 is ready for PL