[COMPLETE] The Early Church Collection Volume 3-ans

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 17th, 2022, 4:30 pm

Sec 24, I was interested to read this, I don't think I've actually read Cyprian before!

Just one PL note:

0:43 text "...turn and mourn, then thou shalt..."
heard: "...turn and mourn, when thou shalt..."

Cheers,
Patrick

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » May 18th, 2022, 6:08 am

patrickrandall wrote: ↑May 17th, 2022, 4:30 pm Sec 24, I was interested to read this, I don't think I've actually read Cyprian before!

Just one PL note:

0:43 text "...turn and mourn, then thou shalt..."
heard: "...turn and mourn, when thou shalt..."

Cheers,
Patrick

Spot check is there.

David is pushing on through his epistles which I'm looking forward to listening to.

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 18th, 2022, 9:39 pm

InTheDesert wrote: ↑May 18th, 2022, 6:08 am

Spot check is there.

Sec 24 spot PL Ok!

Thanks!
Patrick

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 18th, 2022, 10:19 pm

Section 11: some some striking analysis with a surprisingly contemporary ring, especially in Chapter 2!

PL Notes:

repetition 5:25 "I made me...vineyards'

5:55 text "treasure of kings"
heard "treasure of men"
7:04 -- 7:06 gap and random noises

Thanks!
Patrick

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » May 19th, 2022, 7:30 am

patrickrandall wrote: ↑May 18th, 2022, 10:19 pm Section 11: some some striking analysis with a surprisingly contemporary ring, especially in Chapter 2!

Thanks!
Patrick

Spot checks:

repetition 5:19 "I made me...vineyards'

5:49 text "treasure of kings"
heard "treasure of men"
7:00 gap and random noises

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 19th, 2022, 8:31 pm

InTheDesert wrote: ↑May 19th, 2022, 7:30 am
Spot checks:

repetition 5:19 "I made me...vineyards'

5:49 text "treasure of kings"
heard "treasure of men"
7:00 gap and random noises

section 11 spot PL OK!

Thanks,
Patrick

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 19th, 2022, 9:06 pm

Section 10: Usually I encounter discussions of the relationship of the Logos to the Father; how interesting to look at it from a different perspective, that of the Logos to the flesh!

PL note:

3:33 text, "impassible, incomparable"
heard, "impassible, incorruptible"

Cheers!
Patrick

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 20th, 2022, 12:53 pm

Section 28: now that's what I call a eulogy! Absolutely spectacular.

One PL note:

21:16 text "Sorrow not as others..."
heard: "Sorrow not as those...."

Actually I think it's fine and was about to mark it PL OK, but thought you might want the opportunity to review.

Thanks for a spectacular listen!
Patrick

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » May 21st, 2022, 6:18 am

patrickrandall wrote: ↑May 20th, 2022, 12:53 pm Actually I think it's fine and was about to mark it PL OK, but thought you might want the opportunity to review.

Thanks for a spectacular listen!
Patrick

Section 10 Spot checks:
3:33 text, "impassible, incomparable"
heard, "impassible, incorruptible"

Section 28 Spot checks:
21:13 text "Sorrow not as others..."
heard: "Sorrow not as those...."

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 21st, 2022, 4:16 pm

InTheDesert wrote: ↑May 21st, 2022, 6:18 am
Section 10 Spot checks:
3:33 text, "impassible, incomparable"
heard, "impassible, incorruptible"

Section 28 Spot checks:
21:13 text "Sorrow not as others..."
heard: "Sorrow not as those...."

Section 10 and 28, both spot PL OK!

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 21st, 2022, 7:34 pm

Section 26: I heard echoes of Buddhism in the discussion of the absence of desire as the key to peace.

PL notes:

2:35 text "that the chastity"
heard "that to chastity" (very minor but possibly impacts the sense of the sentence)

9:04 text "hence with reason adulterers do not"
heard "hence the reason adulterers do not" (I think this would be fine as is)

Thanks!
Patrick

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » May 22nd, 2022, 7:11 am

patrickrandall wrote: ↑May 21st, 2022, 7:34 pm Section 26: I heard echoes of Buddhism in the discussion of the absence of desire as the key to peace.

PL notes:

2:35 text "that the chastity"
heard "that to chastity" (very minor but possibly impacts the sense of the sentence)

9:04 text "hence with reason adulterers do not"
heard "hence the reason adulterers do not" (I think this would be fine as is)

Thanks!
Patrick

Section 26 Spot Checks:
2:34 text "that the chastity"
heard "that to chastity" (very minor but possibly impacts the sense of the sentence)

9:02 text "hence with reason adulterers do not"
heard "hence the reason adulterers do not" (I think this would be fine as is)

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 22nd, 2022, 9:17 am

InTheDesert wrote: ↑May 22nd, 2022, 7:11 am
Section 26 Spot Checks:
2:34 text "that the chastity"
heard "that to chastity" (very minor but possibly impacts the sense of the sentence)

9:02 text "hence with reason adulterers do not"
heard "hence the reason adulterers do not" (I think this would be fine as is)

Section 26, spot PL OK!

Thanks,
Patrick

patrickrandall · Post by **patrickrandall** » May 22nd, 2022, 6:45 pm

Section 18: interesting topic, much here that was new to me

PL notes:

24:07 text "scenes are unreal and conventional"
heard "scenes are unreal and unconventional"

25:40 burst of static

Thanks!
Patrick

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » May 22nd, 2022, 11:20 pm

patrickrandall wrote: ↑May 22nd, 2022, 6:45 pm Section 18: interesting topic, much here that was new to me

PL notes:

24:07 text "scenes are unreal and conventional"
heard "scenes are unreal and unconventional"

25:40 burst of static

Thanks!
Patrick

The second part is much more interesting (the real reason I included it). Spot checks at 24:06 and 25:39.