[COMPLETE][SOLO]The Bobbsey Twins in a Big City by Laura Lee Hope - kit
the children seem to take everything in their stride and they are always lucky 
a feel-good book.
Perfectly read again, only one small bit at the outro:
> at 10:55: "of the Bobbsey twins in the great city" - this part can be cut, "End of Section 5" is enough. Only at the very last section of the book you need to say the full end disclaimer: "End of The Bobbsey twins in the great city, by Laura Lee Hope" (see first post for details)
Sonia
a feel-good book.Perfectly read again, only one small bit at the outro:
> at 10:55: "of the Bobbsey twins in the great city" - this part can be cut, "End of Section 5" is enough. Only at the very last section of the book you need to say the full end disclaimer: "End of The Bobbsey twins in the great city, by Laura Lee Hope" (see first post for details)
Sonia
Section 5 corrected and ready for spot PL.Kitty wrote: ↑January 20th, 2022, 2:03 am the children seem to take everything in their stride and they are always lucky
Perfectly read again, only one small bit at the outro:
> at 10:55: "of the Bobbsey twins in the great city" - this part can be cut, "End of Section 5" is enough. Only at the very last section of the book you need to say the full end disclaimer: "End of The Bobbsey twins in the great city, by Laura Lee Hope" (see first post for details)
Sonia
Section 6 uploaded.
Krista
ah now they arrived in New York. And I am really curious what they will bring back for Uncle Jack there seems to be a mystery.
I see you now decided to go with the shortened intro after all, or was this an oversight ? I thought you said you'd go with the long disclaimer throughout.
Will you be changing them for sections 2-5 as well, so that we are consistent throughout ? If so let me know so I can make a spot PL.
Thanks, both now PL ok.
Sonia
there seems to be a mystery.I see you now decided to go with the shortened intro after all, or was this an oversight ? I thought you said you'd go with the long disclaimer throughout.
Will you be changing them for sections 2-5 as well, so that we are consistent throughout ? If so let me know so I can make a spot PL.Thanks, both now PL ok.
Sonia
sorry, but there is still some tweaking of the intro needed, for both sections:Section 6:
> The name of the author should not come after the first mention of the book, but the title and author need to be repeated a second time after the disclaimer. You can read the correct wording in the first post, here again for reference, the underlined parts need correcting:
"Section 6 of The Bobbsey Twins in a Great City. (without the author here)
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Read by Krista Selesky
The Bobbsey Twins in a Great City, by Laura Lee Hope.
Chapter 6: On to New York."
Section 7:
> same here, the intro has the same errors: (it would have been easier to go with the short intro after all
)"Section 7 of The Bobbsey Twins in a Great City. (without the author here)
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Read by Krista Selesky
The Bobbsey Twins in a Great City, by Laura Lee Hope.
Chapter 7: On the express train."
> at 0:57: stumble and repeat, can get cut out: "Why—why! gasped"
The rest of the story was perfect, thanks. Those little Bobbseys are starting to annoy me by constantly running off
Sonia
I can't believe that they keep running away. What a way to bring up children
Somehow it's bothering me to read the same scenario in each chapter The parents seem only to spend their time running after their children.Ah well...at least 3 of the chapters are PL ok right away.
Two small edits for Section 9:
> at 5:12: stumble and repeat, can be cut once: "and that they were to be put off"
> at 5:50: stumble and repeat, can be cut: "Now, just sit right here"
thanks
Sonia
really the main topic of this story seems to be that the kids always get lost. Must be exhausting for the parents.What will happen with the turtle next ? I bet Freddie will have an encounter with the alligator.
Both sections PL ok, thanks
Sonia