Hi Scarbo,
I made the changes/edits to Section 3 that you suggested and have reposted it. The only other changes I made to Section 3 were that I redid the parts where I say "Giles" because I realized that I mispronounced the name. The two sections are "Sir Giles is very open-handed" at 7:36 and "Why couldn't Sir Giles have married in his own set?" at 8:54. I have also posted Section 4.
- At 0:25, "in which the ancient hostelry abounded," I hear "in which the ancient holstery abounded."
- At 2:43, "The drawl in his voice," I hear "The draw in his voice."
- At 11:54, "Madam" dips in volume level a bit compared to the surrounding dialogue.
I have reposted Section 4 with that sentence corrected.
Scarbo wrote: ↑December 1st, 2021, 6:28 pm
Section 4 sounds great! The only note I have is that at 5:41, "Anne Carfax sank back in her corner," you say "Anne Carfax sat back in her corner."
Section 5 is PL OK! I have one optional note that at 9:40, "I forgot you were a parson's daughter," I hear "I forgot you are a parson's daughter," but since the meaning is the same, you might decide it's fine as is. This is your project, so it's completely up to you! (I'll always do word-perfect PLing for this project as requested, but I wasn't sure whether a difference that minor was worth listing as a regular note.)
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Hi Scarbo,
Thanks for letting me know! I have decided that because it's so small of a detail, I'm going to leave Section 5 the way it is.
By the way, I have posted Section 6.
Scarbo wrote: ↑December 6th, 2021, 7:32 pm
Section 5 is PL OK! I have one optional note that at 9:40, "I forgot you were a parson's daughter," I hear "I forgot you are a parson's daughter," but since the meaning is the same, you might decide it's fine as is. This is your project, so it's completely up to you! (I'll always do word-perfect PLing for this project as requested, but I wasn't sure whether a difference that minor was worth listing as a regular note.)
I'm looking forward to section 6! Just to let you know, I usually try to PL within a day, but I have some PLing to catch up on lately, so it might be a day or two before I can finish this one.
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Great! I have now posted Section 9 which sort of gives you a hint at what happened to Anne but you won't know the complete details until Section 10 which I'll post in the next few days. The story is definitively going to get very interesting from here on out.
(I'll always do word-perfect PLing for this project as requested, but I wasn't sure whether a difference that minor was worth listing as a regular note.)