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Bravo! You are PL OK for 17, 18, and 19. :clap: Jim
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neecheelok70 wrote: July 4th, 2021, 8:21 am Bravo! You are PL OK for 17, 18, and 19. :clap: Jim
Great! Thanks. :9:
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Hey, Jim.

Section 12 and 14 are ready for spot PL. And here are the corrections that I've made.

Section 12
@1:11 - Drink two or three or four quarts of milk at intervals during the day to supply good blood to the system.

Section 14
@1:16 - but Hell is an inference from history.
@2:51 - to say his face has not one unscarred inch on the surface of it.

Sections 20 to 26 are ready for PL.

I'll upload the rest (hopefully) next Sunday.

Thanks!
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Hey, Jim.

Sections 27 to 31 are ready for PL. Feel free to take your time.

Thank you for being the DPLer for this project. I hope to work with you again soon. :thumbs:
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Sections 12 and 14 are now PL OK. Good job! Jim
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Section 20 has a few items to be fixed:

At 2:18-19, countenance should be plural, that is, countenances, and the word furrowed is two syllables, the second part of which is a long o, which is to say it rhymes with toad: furr ode.

At 3:58-59, you have left out the word an and you have mispronounced unregenerate, which is four syllables: un-re-gen-er-ate, the last of the parts sounds like ut.

At 7:48, the word is drooping, not dropping. The two o's here rhyme with those in the word scooping.

Any questions? I am not sure my explanations are clear. Correct and re-send. I am going to try to complete these in the next week.
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Section 21 is PL OK! :thumbs:
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Hi, Jim!

I'm so happy that you are feeling better now. :9: Thank you for PLing my sections.

And sorry for the late reply. My electricity was all over the place. I'll do my best to fix the corrections as soon as possible. :thumbs:
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Thanks, Sara. Jim :)
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Section 22 is PL OK. :D Jim
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Section 23 is PL OK! :clap:
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Hey, Jim!

How are you doing? I'm so sorry for not being active. I have a lot on my plate right now. I'll do my best to correct any mistakes you point out. I hope you are enjoying the book. :9:
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I am recovering well, but am behind. Thanks for your patience! Jim
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Good job. Interesting thoughts throughout. Sections 24-31 are PL OK. I don't think you are supposed to add in any of your own words as you have done at the end, but I am not going to insist on your removing it here. All you need to do is to correct the one file and then we are good to go with uploading it. Yours, Jim :thumbs:
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neecheelok70 wrote: August 6th, 2021, 3:05 pm I am recovering well, but am behind. Thanks for your patience! Jim
I'm happy to hear that you are getting better. Thank you for all you do.
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