Having to wrap my mind around 6's and 7's this early in the morning. Chapter 6=Section 07. Chapter 7=Section 8. Okay, I think I've got it.
"that" is there, but it doesn't matter enough to bother with. I marked it PL OK.
Tempo much more in line with your usual.
I'll get to Section 7 later today, and then this project will be finished.