[Complete] The Fall River Tragedy by Edwin H. Porter - lt

linny · Post by **linny** » November 10th, 2018, 8:54 am

Chapter 8 PL note
3:58 stumble - I cannot close without referring to my pain and surprise at the atrocity of the outrage.
5:05 repeat - When men resort to crime it is for plunder, for gain, from enmity, in sudden anger or for revenge.
8:45 repeat – The Marshal informed the District Attorney that the murder had occurred between ten minutes of 11 o’clock and thirteen minutes after 11 on Thursday morning.
8:59 repeat - The time was as accurate as they could get it, and they had spared no pains to fix it.
9:07 - The alarm had been given by Miss Lizzie Borden, the daughter of the murdered man, when she returned from the barn.
9:13 - At the moment of the discovery she did not know that her stepmother was also dead, though she explained afterwards that she thought her mother had left the house.
9:26 - Nobody had been found who had seen anybody leaving the yard of the Borden house or entering it, although a number of people, who were named, were sitting by their windows close by.
10:40 unusual pause - The conclusion reached was that in the excitement incident to the awful discovery, Miss Borden had forgotten just where she went for the lead.
10:49 - When she [45]found her father lying on the lounge, she ran to the stairs and ascended three or four steps to call Maggie.
11:46 – The one letter that was wanted had not been found.

Post by **Lynnet** » November 10th, 2018, 9:02 am

linny wrote: ↑November 10th, 2018, 8:54 am Chapter 8 PL note
3:58 stumble - I cannot close without referring to my pain and surprise at the atrocity of the outrage.
5:05 repeat - When men resort to crime it is for plunder, for gain, from enmity, in sudden anger or for revenge.
8:45 repeat – The Marshal informed the District Attorney that the murder had occurred between ten minutes of 11 o’clock and thirteen minutes after 11 on Thursday morning.
8:59 repeat - The time was as accurate as they could get it, and they had spared no pains to fix it.
9:07 - The alarm had been given by Miss Lizzie Borden, the daughter of the murdered man, when she returned from the barn.
9:13 - At the moment of the discovery she did not know that her stepmother was also dead, though she explained afterwards that she thought her mother had left the house.
9:26 - Nobody had been found who had seen anybody leaving the yard of the Borden house or entering it, although a number of people, who were named, were sitting by their windows close by.
10:40 unusual pause - The conclusion reached was that in the excitement incident to the awful discovery, Miss Borden had forgotten just where she went for the lead.
10:49 - When she [45]found her father lying on the lounge, she ran to the stairs and ascended three or four steps to call Maggie.
11:46 – The one letter that was wanted had not been found.

Oh dear... guess my concentration was off

linny · Post by **linny** » November 10th, 2018, 9:34 am

You have good reason. You got back on track. Chapters 9 and 10 are PL OK.

Post by **Lynnet** » November 10th, 2018, 2:13 pm

Chapter 8 has been cleaned up.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 10th, 2018, 2:28 pm

One correct was missed. I've updated the timestamp

8:58 - The alarm had been given by Miss Lizzie Borden, the daughter of the murdered man, when she returned from the barn.

Post by **Lynnet** » November 10th, 2018, 2:42 pm

Chapter 8 take 3... Thanks for your patience

linny · Post by **linny** » November 11th, 2018, 6:12 am

Third time is the charm! PL OK.

Don't worry about me. Spot checks are easy.

Post by **Lynnet** » November 14th, 2018, 3:19 pm

Chapter 11 is ready for PL.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 15th, 2018, 10:48 am

Chapter 11 is PL OK.

Chapter 12 pl note:
15:31 repeat – was in waiting at the side entrance and was also driven off.

Post by **Lynnet** » November 20th, 2018, 2:10 pm

CSI: Fall River... I mean, chapter 13 is ready for PL.

linny · Post by **linny** » November 21st, 2018, 12:02 pm

This many spots here and that many spots there but that one was from an insect. Oh boy.

12 is spot check PL OK and 13 is PL OK.

Post by **Lynnet** » December 4th, 2018, 2:17 am

Chapters 14-17 are ready for PL.

linny · Post by **linny** » December 7th, 2018, 3:07 pm

14-16 are all PL OK. I'll start up on 17-20 tomorrow. My sister is in from out of state for a visit so my LV time is a bit short for the next week or so.

Post by **Lynnet** » December 7th, 2018, 3:28 pm

linny wrote: ↑December 7th, 2018, 3:07 pm 14-16 are all PL OK. I'll start up on 17-20 tomorrow. My sister is in from out of state for a visit so my LV time is a bit short for the next week or so.

No hurry. My mom will be arriving Tuesday for a month

so I'm getting my fix now as who knows what will happen while she's here

linny · Post by **linny** » December 10th, 2018, 1:55 pm

Chapters 17-20 are all PL OK.

A month is a long time. I hope you make some wonderful memories.