[COMPLETE] Eighty Seven, by Pansy - tg

joyfulmn · Post by **joyfulmn** » July 19th, 2018, 8:51 pm

Chapters 10, 11 & 12 PL OK

I do believe I can tell, by the number of files you've been recording, that K has been riding his bike outside and not upstairs.

Post by **TriciaG** » July 20th, 2018, 5:25 am

Ha ha! Less that this time than that I've not done any work for Pat since last Thursday.

joyfulmn · Post by **joyfulmn** » July 20th, 2018, 9:37 pm

Chapters 13, 14 & 15 PL OK

Did I give you time to take a deep breath?

Post by **TriciaG** » July 21st, 2018, 7:10 am

Yeah, but now it's the weekend. I usually don't record on the weekends.

joyfulmn · Post by **joyfulmn** » July 21st, 2018, 9:43 am

Well that's part of your deep breath dontcha know.

Post by **TriciaG** » July 26th, 2018, 6:50 am

Two more chapters up. Probably no more coming today; neighbor is getting a new roof, so it might be too noisy to record.

EDIT: So they weren't too loud any only now have started pounding. Chapter 18 is uploading now.

Post by **TriciaG** » July 26th, 2018, 3:45 pm

Chapter 19 uploading now. I got one in this afternoon as a rainstorm was rolling in - the roofers had left.

joyfulmn · Post by **joyfulmn** » July 28th, 2018, 11:26 am

Capters 17, 18 & 19 PL OK

Chapter 16 -
Word change needed Methinks you were distracted for a moment.

At the very beginning “Chapter 14 of ....... Chapter 16”

Thanks for something to catch.

Post by **TriciaG** » July 30th, 2018, 11:28 am

Correction made on chapter 14 (I think the Roman numerals threw me), and chapter 20 is uploading now.

joyfulmn · Post by **joyfulmn** » July 30th, 2018, 4:10 pm

Chapter 16 PL OK

Very understandable with Roman numerals.

Think I'll wait for a couple more chapters.

Post by **TriciaG** » August 6th, 2018, 8:25 am

Chapter 21 uploading now.

I'm going to start in on recording 22. It's a change of scene back to Vine.

Post by **TriciaG** » August 6th, 2018, 9:34 am

OK, 22 uploading now.

When I read ahead a while ago and started reading this chapter, I thought it was an elderly woman in the rocking chair. Then it was revealed to be Miss Force, and I was baffled as to how she could be so much older than Vine. I went back to the first couple sentences and realized it didn't say she was elderly; just that she was the elder of the two ladies.

I'm glad I didn't start recording this chapter without having noticed that earlier!

joyfulmn · Post by **joyfulmn** » August 6th, 2018, 9:43 am

Lol. Yep, would hate to have her sound way older than her years.

Should I do just 20 & 21 and wait for a couple more since the scene changed as you mentioned?

Post by **TriciaG** » August 6th, 2018, 9:55 am

Totally up to you.

joyfulmn · Post by **joyfulmn** » August 6th, 2018, 11:21 am

Chapters 20, 21, & 22 PL OK

Oops, I got carried away.