[COMPLETE] The Two-Gun Man by Charles A Seltzer - dc

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Post by DrPGould » June 6th, 2018, 11:19 am

Tom:

You are most welcome. Two notes for Section 11. At 3:25 the word "with" is missing in front of the phrase "its suggestion of" (without it, the clause just dangles).

This next one is a bit picky at 4:32 there is a loud click in the recording. (I'll let you decide if you want to leave it in or not.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Penumbra » June 7th, 2018, 11:49 am

You keep on picking away, my friend. I appreciate all your help.

I have found the missing "with" and will put it in. However, I'm not hearing the loud click you refer to. Eyeballing it, there is only the "c" in "peculiarities" that stands out as a possibility. Could you check the time, please, and maybe give me the sentence in which the click occurs?

Thanks!
Tom Penn

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Post by DrPGould » June 7th, 2018, 3:07 pm

Tom: it was the "c" in peculiarities, but it's not a big thing.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Penumbra » June 8th, 2018, 1:01 pm

For whatever reason, when I pronounce a hard C, it comes with a sharp leading edge that can spike well above the surrounding text. Usually I knock it down a little. I have done so at the spot you noted in chapter 11 (and, of course, added "with" where it belongs).

Chapter 11 is ready for spot PL.

As an added bonus, chapter 12 is also ready for PL.

Thanks for listening.
Tom Penn

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Post by DrPGould » June 10th, 2018, 6:57 pm

Tom:

Sections 11 & 12 are PL-OK! (Thought I had figured out why Ferguson is so slow....I mean waiting until chapter 12 for "The Story Begins." But it was not the story, but the story inside the story--so to speak. :)

Nicely done.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Penumbra » June 11th, 2018, 2:16 pm

Section 13 ready for PL.

Battle lines, already drawn, are underlined, highlighted, italicized, and cast in concrete.
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Post by DrPGould » June 13th, 2018, 2:46 pm

Section 13 PL-OK.

Hmmmm Stafford seems to be quick on the uptake, except when it matters.......

You're over halfway home!

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Penumbra » June 13th, 2018, 5:42 pm

Section 14 ready for PL.

At the end of his rope.
Tom Penn

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Post by craigdav1 » June 13th, 2018, 6:00 pm

I just noticed that the section 13 filename has an uppercase S where it should be lowercase s. Thanks in advance for correcting.

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Post by DrPGould » June 13th, 2018, 6:30 pm

Penumbra wrote:
June 13th, 2018, 5:42 pm
Section 14 ready for PL.

At the end of his rope.
Couldn't leave it dangling....darn.....

Section 14 PL OK!

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by Penumbra » June 13th, 2018, 6:51 pm

craigdav1 wrote:
June 13th, 2018, 6:00 pm
I just noticed that the section 13 filename has an uppercase S where it should be lowercase s. Thanks in advance for correcting.
To many years of unconsciously capitalizing peoples' names when I type.
Fixed. Good eye.
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Post by Penumbra » July 6th, 2018, 12:27 pm

Section 15 ready for PL.

I sure hope Ferguson is watching his back.
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Post by DrPGould » July 6th, 2018, 4:17 pm

Movin' on down the trail..... Chapter 15 is PL-OK. (I would hasten to point out that Ferguson has skipped a groove...understandable in the situation...Ferg knew who he told Rope to stay out from in the middle of, and Rope's statement clearly indicates that he didn't. The Radford lady also heard the dying declaration... so there's little reason to doubt the id of the second murderer. Of course, those little details are also why it is fiction :wink: )

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Post by Penumbra » July 14th, 2018, 1:53 pm

Section 16 is ready for PL.

There are no two ways about it, the man's an idiot when it comes to women. But he is clever about other things.
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Post by Penumbra » July 16th, 2018, 12:42 pm

Chapter 17 ready for PL.

And now it's Ferguson's turn.
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