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by Roohi
May 16th, 2018, 7:34 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
Replies: 252
Views: 34832

Re: [grp/romance] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

43,44,45 are PL ok :clap:
regards
roohi
by Roohi
April 30th, 2018, 5:06 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
Replies: 252
Views: 34832

Re: [grp/romance] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

Haha
Thanks,
Regards,
Roohi
by Roohi
April 29th, 2018, 11:07 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
Replies: 252
Views: 34832

Re: [grp/romance] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

Thanks
I’ll do mine this week too
Regards
Roohi
by Roohi
April 24th, 2018, 8:49 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
Replies: 252
Views: 34832

Re: [grp/romance] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

Thanks Jim
I agree with the ‘should ‘ bit ;
I was in two minds about it myself but the pause did hamper the flow.
Thanks anyway... one always learns and nothing from a colleague in the form of advice is gibberish.
by Roohi
April 22nd, 2018, 6:02 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
Replies: 252
Views: 34832

Re: [grp/romance] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

42 if fine.
Just two very small edits
In the intro there is a longish pause befor ‘book’
1.6 ‘Suzy said she .... be glad ‘
Change to ‘Suzy said she should be glad’

Thanks
Roohi
by Roohi
April 8th, 2018, 3:37 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
Replies: 252
Views: 34832

Re: [grp/romance] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

Well partially . Haven’t uploaded a file yet.
Let’s see
by Roohi
April 7th, 2018, 6:00 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
Replies: 252
Views: 34832

Re: [grp/romance] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

Section 40 very well done. Just change the outdo to section no instead of chapter no.
by Roohi
April 7th, 2018, 5:42 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
Replies: 252
Views: 34832

Re: [grp/romance] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke

Just one little PL note for 39
The ending should be the section no not the book and chapter.
Otherwise brilliant
Roohi