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Thank you.

Here is the new Section 2.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/upwardpath_02_various_128kb.mp3
3:25

Next, I would like to try Section 21, Going to School Under Difficulties.

Here is Section 4.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/upwardpath_04_various_128kb.mp3
3:43

I was also wondering if I could resubmit Section 2. I'm not happy with yesterday's upload, so I re-recorded it.

I don't know if this is the right place to mention this, but I noticed an error in the MW that seems to have been copied into the catalogue. My name seems to have gotten attached to Section 50 when gtau did it all himself. At first, I thought I accidently stepped on someone else's section until I re...

Oops! I think that we have an error in the text. In the last line, I believe that the word "Titians" should be "Titans." This word is found in a number of original sources, such as this one, published in 1886: https://books.google.com/books?id=gFblfflLdsQC Also found in this one...

Do you mean you have re-recorded the poem with the correction ? Well, if you have done the work anyway, let's have it :) I suppose, I need to PL it all again ? You did not just change one line ? Sonia For something this short, I just re-record the entire piece. Here is an updated version. Hopefully...

May I next claim Section 4?

Thanks.

And they are all nicely read. If I was picky I would only mention one tiny error in Sonnet 18. > at 0:11: Therefore think not the Past is wise alone – you said “past as wise”, but I think this is trivial and it doesn’t really change the meaning, so I’ll mark it PL ok as well. So all your poems are ...

kathrinee wrote:Section 2 is all yours - thanks for claiming, Matthew

This is my first attempt at something that's not poetry. So, please, let me know if I did it correctly.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/upwardpath_02_various_128kb.mp3
3:19

Thanks,

-Matthew

LOL ah I have praised you too soon...well I actually did listen to the entire sonnet again, as it was so small. It's still PL ok. But indeed, whenever you record it from scratch, always mention it in the thread, so that the DPL is forewarned that it needs to be checked again. Sonia Thanks for being...

is it ok for you to read 14 15 16 18 19 20 and have ryan read the middle poem? i have signed you up for those to have them reserved, but if you dont like this arrangement, i can release the sections again. let me know what you think :) Here are the requested files: https://librivox.org/uploads/caro...

yes :thumbs: this time your tongue and lips did what was required of them. I can hear the word clearly. You are also good at editing in single sentences, I practically didn't hear a difference in tone. Well done ! PL ok Sonia No, sorry, I should have stated this in my previous post: That is a wholl...

May I claim Section 2?

Thanks,

-Matthew

I can work on Sonnets 14 - 20, although, I do see that Ryan was assign one if them in the middle of that run. Let me know what you would like me to do. Thanks.

Sonnet 11 > at 0:45 : "For worldlings cannot" – I listened to this 3 times now, I hear “ worldlies ” which doesn’t make sense to me. I maybe mistaken though, maybe you can have a listen in and check ? Maybe there was a little jump in the recording ? No, not a jump; I just can't pronounce ...

Hi Matthew thanks for joining the group. :) I enjoyed your reading very much too. :9: Today seems the day of blisses for me LOL You have a calm way of reading and an agreeable tone of voice, which I like very much. Also, word perfect reading, so all is fine. :clap: PL ok Hope to hear more from you....