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by craigdav1
February 26th, 2012, 3:36 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Born Again by Alfred Lawson - gu
Replies: 85
Views: 11415

Re: [SOLO/SCI-FI] Born Again by Alfred Lawson - gu

A good read! Can't wait until the next installment. But I promise I won't peek.
by craigdav1
February 26th, 2012, 3:14 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [Complete] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck
Replies: 57
Views: 6058

Re: [Solo] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck

10
21:17 remove “not”
36:02 replace “do” with “did’ [not sure this correction is necessary]

Back on the water, again. Do all of "your" books have a nautical theme?
by craigdav1
February 26th, 2012, 7:22 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-neb
Replies: 72
Views: 8406

Re: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-ne

Great! Now we (and those mice) can take a deep breath of unfixed air and relax. If you're doing another book in science and looking for a dpl, send me a note so I can catch on the launch forum.
by craigdav1
February 25th, 2012, 3:27 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [Complete] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck
Replies: 57
Views: 6058

Re: [Solo] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck

09
48:04 replace “detached” with “drenched”

Gotta start 10 so I can find out what Flora does next!
by craigdav1
February 25th, 2012, 7:16 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-neb
Replies: 72
Views: 8406

Re: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-ne

If you've made changes to these files (6 and 19) you need to upload the corrected files as the ones in the MW are the originals that I PL'd.
by craigdav1
February 24th, 2012, 8:20 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-neb
Replies: 72
Views: 8406

Re: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-ne

Are 6 and 19 finished? The world awaits! Well those interested in chemistry, anyway (and who cares about the rest).
DaveC
by craigdav1
February 23rd, 2012, 7:52 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Born Again by Alfred Lawson - gu
Replies: 85
Views: 11415

Re: [SOLO/SCI-FI] Born Again by Alfred Lawson - gu

03
3:21 delete repeated phrase “I could not recollect”
4:57 missing sentence, “Would he not consider…”
Add 5 seconds of silence at end of file.

Chuck, do you prefer comments here or in the MW? A cliff hanger ending! Yikes.
by craigdav1
February 23rd, 2012, 7:24 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [Complete] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck
Replies: 57
Views: 6058

Re: [Solo] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck

08
24:31 missing three sentences starting with “He arrived at the cottage.” It's snowing again, grrrrr.
by craigdav1
February 21st, 2012, 8:40 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [Complete] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck
Replies: 57
Views: 6058

Re: [Solo] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck

Another good read. Time for a cookie and on to 08.
by craigdav1
February 21st, 2012, 8:09 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-neb
Replies: 72
Views: 8406

Re: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-ne

Just waiting to ok sections 6 and 19 and you're finished. Congrats! BTW, 5 and 6 are not too long to be combined. I think the limit is about 70 minutes.
by craigdav1
February 20th, 2012, 8:54 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-neb
Replies: 72
Views: 8406

Re: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-ne

I'm putting my comments into the MW as requested. I 'll finish everything by tomorrow. Am I correct that the 15 you re-uploaded contained the corrections?
by craigdav1
February 19th, 2012, 11:19 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-neb
Replies: 72
Views: 8406

Re: SOLO Experiments-Different Kinds of Air, J. Priestley-ne

18 PL OK!

See previous comment about section 15. Congrats on the other sections. I was thinking of suggesting a retired priest!
by craigdav1
February 19th, 2012, 9:52 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Born Again by Alfred Lawson - gu
Replies: 85
Views: 11415

Re: [SOLO/SCI-FI] Born Again by Alfred Lawson - gu

02 PL OK!

Another good read. I would have given him a life preserver as I helped throw him overboard!
by craigdav1
February 19th, 2012, 9:36 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [Complete] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck
Replies: 57
Views: 6058

Re: [Solo] Chance by Joseph Conrad - ck

06

9:59 noise present

An engaging 'chapter' and a good read.
by craigdav1
February 19th, 2012, 8:24 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The City at World's End, by Edmond Hamilton - kd
Replies: 31
Views: 3488

Re: ~[SOLO] The City at World's End, by Edmond Hamilton - kd

Mark, I try to listen to sections as soon as they are posted but sometimes find myself playing catchup on the weekends. I listen while reading the text but only suggest changes if a word substitution substantially changes the meaning of the sentence. This rarely happens in my limited experience. Can...