I've PL'ed section 5 and there are several glitches: 16:51 heard too in “and any self-restraint also” 22:10 heard “too” in “through the gates of her sleep also” 42:23 missing word in “with regard to my own personal purpose.” Everything else is excellent. Loved that accent you used for Aunt Janet :th...
Hi, I've downloaded and PL'ed section 1. And I found two glitches that you may wish to redo: At 43:46 heard “as I have always said” at 44:55, I couldn’t hear “own” in “to keep it in her own control “ Everything else is great. And just a comment on that first person narrator character, I think I know...
Hi there,
I had some free time today so I've PL'ed section 1 and it is PL OK.
I can't offer to be your DPL yet, but if you are still in need of a DPL by the end of the week I'll try and PL more sections if they're in the MW.