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Hi clarksonr, Chapter 5 is very well read. You have a fantastic reading speed, it keeps the listeners very interested, good job. I just have a couple PL notes for it: 0:28~ you seem to have missed the chapter title ('Winning the Degree of Shingebis'). 18:56~ you said 'Why is it', implying the quote...

Here is Chapter 5 coming in at 19:16 https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/sunsetisland_05_hoisington_128kb.mp3

I can do Section 5 Winning the Degree of Shingebis.

Lynnet wrote: ↑September 10th, 2018, 6:56 am Sections 2 and 3 PL OK.

Whoohoo! Thank you for the listen.

Section 3 - The Bargain is Struck- 20:07 https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/swordmaker_03_barr_128kb.mp3

Section 2 - The Bargain is Struck- 21:41 https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/swordmaker_02_barr_128kb.mp3

I can take Sections 2 & 3.

Lynnet wrote: ↑August 27th, 2018, 11:58 am Section 1 PL OK. Nicely read.

Thank you.

Section 1 - AN OFFER TO OPEN THE RIVER - 32:22 - https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/swordmaker_01_barr_128kb.mp3

Her is the update for Section 17 - Chapter 16 Thought In Action - 16:29 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/dynamicthought_16_atkinson_128kb.mp3 This is chapter 16 which should have 17 in its file name. The file is pl ok. It didn't replace the correct 16 but only because the original 1...

17 5:32-5:42 reduce silence to <2s, otherwise pl ok. Her is the update for Section 17 - Chapter 16 Thought In Action - 16:29 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/dynamicthought_16_atkinson_128kb.mp3 This is chapter 16 which should have 17 in its file name. The file is pl ok. It didn't r...

I can take Section 1 - AN OFFER TO OPEN THE RIVER

craigdav1 wrote: ↑August 21st, 2018, 6:37 am 17
5:32-5:42 reduce silence to <2s,
otherwise pl ok.

Her is the update for Section 17 - Chapter 16 Thought In Action - 16:29 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/dynamicthought_16_atkinson_128kb.mp3

Here is Section 17 - Chapter 16 Thought In Action - 16:29 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/dynamicthought_17_atkinson_128kb.mp3

I can make any corrections tomorrow.

Hi Clarkson! As there is no DPL yet I have reviewed your poems for you. They were really great to listen to! You have done a wonderful job of recording them and I can hear your passion when recording which is great! Here is the feedback for each section - Section 2 1:18 – mien – should be like meen...