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The fix is perfect! Chapter 24 is PL OK. BOOK COMPLETE! :clap: I really enjoyed working with you, Roger! I would love to be your DPL for another one of your projects. I'm going to be out of town WITHOUT (!) my laptop November 16 through 20, so if I see your next one before then I'll try to grab it u...

Well, THAT'S not who I expected the murderer to be.

The only thing I found was at 10:30 where it says, "...climbing up through the SEEMINGLY small opening in the fireplace." You said UNSEEMINGLY.

Chapter 23 is PL OK!

By the way, that stuff about Slim Jim in this chapter cracked me up!

Woo hoo! Only one more chapter!

OK, for Chapter 23 I only found two mispronunciations, and it's fine if you just want to leave them as is, but here they are anyway: At 2:05 where it says, "...she had determined to stay through Mr. Stone's sojourn there," you pronounced Stone more like "Sone." At 16:24 where it ...

Chapter 22 is PL OK!

Yes, I'm sure Fessenden himself wouldn't want anyone calling him Bob, except maybe his mom, who probably used to call him Bobby when he was little.

Just one teeny-tiny thing in Chapter 22:

At 14:03 the text says, "She raised her wonderful eyes and looked straight at ROB." You said BOB.

Well, it's about time Fleming Stone showed up, since the book is almost over! I'm sort of rooting for Fessenden to solve it himself first though.

Chapters 20 and 21 are both PL OK!

Notes for Chapter 20:

At 3:19 the text says, "...but turn toward the new TRAIL." You said TRIAL.

At 16:09 the text says, "in West Sixty-SIXTH Street." You said NINTH.

That's all I could find!

Patched very well!

Chapter 19 is PL OK!

Yes, it's getting interesting!

Just a couple of things in Chapter 19:

At 11:04 the text reads, "Why that woman is FRIGHTENED at everything." You said FRIGHTENING.

At 13:22 the text reads, "...and one of the facts." You added the word LAST in there.

That's all I could find!

I will accept either eagle-eared or bat-eared as compliments.

Chapter 18 is PL OK!

Haha! Good one about Carlton changing his name to Frank. :lol: Two things: At 9:10 the text says, "... and except for the SEVERING of old acquaintances..." You said SERVING. At 14:16 the text says, "Schuyler Carlton STARTED as if he had been physically struck." You said STARED. T...

Perfect fix.

Chapter 17 is PL OK.

I agree wholeheartedly with Burt of Burt's Bees.

There's always some French minx who's everlastingly spying about in the hallways. So annoying. :lol: Just one small mistake in Chapter 17: At 11:33, the text reads: "...it had been bits of romantic music that Rob felt sure had been for Schuyler's DELECTATION more than his mother's." You sa...

Perfect fixes!

Chapters 15 and 16 are PL OK!