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by HollyJenson
November 12th, 2017, 9:51 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

The fix is perfect! Chapter 24 is PL OK. BOOK COMPLETE! :clap: I really enjoyed working with you, Roger! I would love to be your DPL for another one of your projects. I'm going to be out of town WITHOUT (!) my laptop November 16 through 20, so if I see your next one before then I'll try to grab it u...
by HollyJenson
November 11th, 2017, 4:03 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Well, THAT'S not who I expected the murderer to be. :D

The only thing I found was at 10:30 where it says, "...climbing up through the SEEMINGLY small opening in the fireplace." You said UNSEEMINGLY.
by HollyJenson
November 8th, 2017, 10:14 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Chapter 23 is PL OK! :clap:

By the way, that stuff about Slim Jim in this chapter cracked me up! :lol:

Woo hoo! Only one more chapter!
by HollyJenson
November 7th, 2017, 5:15 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

OK, for Chapter 23 I only found two mispronunciations, and it's fine if you just want to leave them as is, but here they are anyway: At 2:05 where it says, "...she had determined to stay through Mr. Stone's sojourn there," you pronounced Stone more like "Sone." At 16:24 where it says, "Though not lo...
by HollyJenson
November 4th, 2017, 2:44 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Chapter 22 is PL OK! :clap:

Yes, I'm sure Fessenden himself wouldn't want anyone calling him Bob, except maybe his mom, who probably used to call him Bobby when he was little. :lol:
by HollyJenson
November 3rd, 2017, 8:27 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Just one teeny-tiny thing in Chapter 22:

At 14:03 the text says, "She raised her wonderful eyes and looked straight at ROB." You said BOB.
by HollyJenson
October 30th, 2017, 6:03 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Well, it's about time Fleming Stone showed up, since the book is almost over! :D I'm sort of rooting for Fessenden to solve it himself first though.

Chapters 20 and 21 are both PL OK! :clap:
by HollyJenson
October 28th, 2017, 4:04 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Notes for Chapter 20:

At 3:19 the text says, "...but turn toward the new TRAIL." You said TRIAL.

At 16:09 the text says, "in West Sixty-SIXTH Street." You said NINTH.

That's all I could find!
by HollyJenson
October 25th, 2017, 9:02 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Patched very well! :D

Chapter 19 is PL OK! :clap:
by HollyJenson
October 22nd, 2017, 8:53 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Yes, it's getting interesting!

Just a couple of things in Chapter 19:

At 11:04 the text reads, "Why that woman is FRIGHTENED at everything." You said FRIGHTENING.

At 13:22 the text reads, "...and one of the facts." You added the word LAST in there.

That's all I could find!
by HollyJenson
October 18th, 2017, 9:11 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

I will accept either eagle-eared or bat-eared as compliments. :lol:

Chapter 18 is PL OK!
by HollyJenson
October 16th, 2017, 9:32 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Haha! Good one about Carlton changing his name to Frank. :lol: Two things: At 9:10 the text says, "... and except for the SEVERING of old acquaintances..." You said SERVING. At 14:16 the text says, "Schuyler Carlton STARTED as if he had been physically struck." You said STARED. That's all I could fi...
by HollyJenson
October 15th, 2017, 9:12 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Perfect fix.

Chapter 17 is PL OK. :clap:

I agree wholeheartedly with Burt of Burt's Bees.
by HollyJenson
October 14th, 2017, 10:37 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

There's always some French minx who's everlastingly spying about in the hallways. So annoying. :lol: Just one small mistake in Chapter 17: At 11:33, the text reads: "...it had been bits of romantic music that Rob felt sure had been for Schuyler's DELECTATION more than his mother's." You said DECLARA...
by HollyJenson
October 13th, 2017, 6:31 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] The Clue by Carolyn Wells
Replies: 87
Views: 6078

Re: [SOLO] The Clue by Carolyn Wells - darv

Perfect fixes!

Chapters 15 and 16 are PL OK! :clap: