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by Tortilla
August 8th, 2020, 5:32 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

Great! Here is the first chapter of the second volume. Volume 2, Chapter 1: 10:03 - "[...]reason I want you not to tell *is*, because I wish to surprise" [reading omitted "is"] 14:01 - distracting breathy noise? 25:03 - "unpolished boors in the *county*. I assure you his groom..." ["county" read as ...
by Tortilla
August 2nd, 2020, 7:45 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

Chapter 11: 5:36 - "hands of the servants and children, and tables unpolished and scratched," [awkward cut/transition after "children"] 7:17 - "From Wednesday to Saturday: there was I left" [where awkward transition at "Saturday: there and some microphone static over "Wednesday"] 8:18 - distracting...
by Tortilla
August 2nd, 2020, 5:36 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

It's alright!

Vol. 1, Chapters 8, 9, and 10 are PL OK. :)
by Tortilla
August 1st, 2020, 10:38 am
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

Hurray! Chapter 9: 4:57 - distracting breathy click 11:12 - "'you shall not be obliged to make martyrs of *yourselves*,' said Miss Osborne" ["yourselves" read as "yourself"] 12:49 - distracting breathy click SPOT PL for Chapter 8: Where you replaced "comparison" with "companion" at ~25:12, please ma...
by Tortilla
July 31st, 2020, 7:34 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

Hooray! Congrats on finishing Volume 1. Everything up to Vol. 1, Ch. 7 is PL OK now. Chapter 8: 0:23 - "[...]suppose some of you girls will be *for* going over" ["for" was missing from reading.] 15:55 - audible mouse click 16:05 - audible mouse click 16:39 - audible mouse click 25:12 - "[...] equal ...
by Tortilla
July 30th, 2020, 7:32 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

More DPL Notes! Chapter 3 is PL OK! For Chapter 4 spot check: 22:04 - at the end of the newly inserted line, there a clicky noise that makes it feel edited in. Can you fix this? Chapter 5: 0:59 - A bit of a clipping transition, can this be smoothed out? 20:58 - "I am sure most of my friends are *mor...
by Tortilla
July 29th, 2020, 7:27 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

More edits!
Chapter 4

4:24 - "[...]Well you see, *Elizabeth*," said Mrs. Robert ["Elizabeth" is missing from reading.]

22:04 - missing "--I love to be of use to the fair."
Checked Chapter 3 spot edits as well- "complied" doesn't seem to be changed?
by Tortilla
July 29th, 2020, 5:55 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

Vol. 1, Chapters 1 & 2 are now PL OK. :)
by Tortilla
July 29th, 2020, 5:47 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

Thank you so much! As for the end of book part, I shall go through and adapt that in all the recordings and reupload them :D I would recommend doing that as you get my edits back. :) In terms of text corrections, I will only note them if they significantly change the meaning of a sentence. Chapter ...
by Tortilla
July 29th, 2020, 3:26 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

First set of PL notes (Chapter 1 and 2)! I adore your narrative voice, it's so soothing. <3 Chapter 1 8:31 - unintended pause of hesitation? 25:18 - At the end of the section, make sure to only say "End of Chapter [insert number here, in this case Chapter 1]," not end of [book title]. "End of [book ...
by Tortilla
July 28th, 2020, 2:29 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo
Replies: 59
Views: 597

Re: ~[NOVEL] The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

Hello,

Since I digitized the Gutenberg text, I'd like to DPL. :)
by Tortilla
July 23rd, 2020, 8:10 pm
Forum: Book Suggestions
Topic: The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback [ADOPTED]
Replies: 2
Views: 152

The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback [ADOPTED]

When Jane Austen died, she left several novels unfinished. One of these, titled The Watsons , was later “completed” by Austen’s niece as The Younger Sister . It is one of the first efforts to complete unfinished works by Austen and could also be viewed as early fan fiction. While Hubback is no Auste...
by Tortilla
August 27th, 2016, 9:33 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Messages and Papers of the Presidents: Grant - kd
Replies: 212
Views: 23286

Re: [GROUP] Messages and Papers of the Presidents: Grant - k

OH HAPPY DAYS! Thank you so much Linny and all the readers for finishing this dang project, I'm so happy to see it finished.
by Tortilla
August 27th, 2016, 12:15 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE Witch of Edmonton by Dekker, et al. -rap
Replies: 237
Views: 29421

Re: [FULL] Witch of Edmonton by Dekker, et al. -rap

I will start finally editing tonight for the fully completed acts!!
by Tortilla
August 24th, 2016, 8:45 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: [COMPLETE] Queen Zixi of Ix by L. Frank Baum - tg
Replies: 123
Views: 10602

Re: [GROUP] Queen Zixi of Ix by L. Frank Baum - tg

Thank you linny and everyone else! I appreciate your help in crazy college life.