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Maybe you could look over the summary and keywords list in the First Post and suggest what else seems significant?


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The summary is great Michele. I can't think of any oher keywords - betrayel maybe?

19 is re upped with all corrections made. Section 19 is PL OK :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: Congratulations Michele. Well done. You did a great job. You really threw yourself into it and gave all the different characters a unique voice. As I said you really appeared to enjoy Conachur but you also did...

Well that was an abrupt ending! I know Conachur is a ..... but you really sounded like you enjoyed reading him :D A few notes on section 19 2.46 Certainly - you say certainty 8.20 There is a repeat “do you not ..” 16.20 "We have had a merry night" - You say minute 18.15 "And the openi...

17 is re-upped with 2 corrections. Weird, as I remember recording "Are we all ready", then editing it to say "Are we ready all". I must have erased it instead. Ah well, this is the way PLers earn their stripes. I've been listening with "fresh ears" to the whole book, a...

That was intense! Poor Iollan and I was disappointed by Buinne! Well read Michele. Nearing the end now. Just 2 notes on section 17 - 1.54, the pronounciation of "scaling" Is it not as in scaling a wall? And at 6.26 the line “Are we ready all?” said Naoise. “Then let us arrange this sally.”...

I'll get around to these over the coming weekend

msfry wrote: ↑March 1st, 2023, 6:15 pm 16 is uploaded. "Thrust and Parry" -- everybody in their own way.

It's heating up now! Sections 14, 15 and 16 PL OK

msfry wrote: ↑February 27th, 2023, 8:08 pm 14 is uploaded. Like Dierdra, I'm "nobody ever listens to me" forlorn, and speechless.

Section 14 - the tension is mounting!! Just a small pronounciation correction at 8.30. Saileach is pronounced Sal-loch. Check https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dw_OnYuAoKc&t=15s

msfry wrote: ↑February 26th, 2023, 11:36 am 13 is uploaded with 3 corrections. Thanks for catching those. 2nd time cited for Buinne isn't accurate but I found it . . . then forgot to notate it for you. Ochone!

13 is PL OK!

Section 13 is uploaded. Sometimes men just will not listen to the warnings! AAARRRGGG. I fear a train wreck is coming. I had to guess at several names: Loch Eitche, ochone, Buinne, Dun Daelgan, Ard Saileach. Please cite times where I err in pronunciation. Hi Michele - mostly fine just Ochone at 1.1...

Section 12 is uploaded. https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/deirdre_12_stephens_128kb.mp3 Geasa? I sense there's a plot afoot, with Conachur at its center. Was not sure how to pronounce Annte and Conal. Section 12 is PL OK - yes Conachur is up to no good unless it's the drink talking. Th...

msfry wrote: ↑February 16th, 2023, 9:56 pm Section 11 is uploaded. Book 2 begins, it's 7 years later . . . . and all is forgiven and forgotten. So let's make a party!!!!!

Section 11 is PL OK. All is calm! On the home stretch now!

msfry wrote: ↑February 16th, 2023, 10:16 am Section 10 is uploaded. I excel at sustained panic and screeching, I think. Tell me if you agree.

Section 10 PL OK. If panic and screeching were an Olympic sport, you'd be a contender

Section 9 is PL OK - Lavarcham's advice is brilliantly written. Maybe she should marry the king!!

Regarding Fedelm, her mother doesn't seem to be mentioned anywhere. Check out https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conchobar_mac_Nessa

08 is uploaded. "Chauvanism on steroids."
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Wow - mega steroids! Poor Deirdre!
Section 8 PL OK