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by oscaraduran
March 8th, 2021, 9:47 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

All chapters marked PL_OK.

-Oscar
by oscaraduran
March 7th, 2021, 7:06 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

Amy, I listened to chapter 1 and found no problems. It is marked OK. I spot checked chapters 5 and 6. Both of these are also marked OK. Chapter 7 still has the extraneous sound, along with a couple of missing words, so I left its status as is. Nevertheless, I listened to that part carefully and foun...
by oscaraduran
February 2nd, 2021, 11:21 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

Gary, You interpreted Ben Manx very well. He provided some amusing comic relief in these chapters. You could say he stole the scene from the daring St. Leger. CHAPTER 9 Needs to be corrected: 1:46 "Ole Haskins was" instead of "Ole Haskins are" 8:08 "the way" instead of ...
by oscaraduran
January 28th, 2021, 2:17 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

For GJConover: I enjoyed these chapters. Here are a few observations, divided into those errors that I believe should be addressed, and those that may be ignored, if you choose. CHAPTER 7 Thinks to correct: 3:26 There is an electronic sound. CHAPTER 8 Thinks to correct: 1:19 "betoking" ins...
by oscaraduran
January 28th, 2021, 12:15 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

Colleen,

I agree with your choice of corrections. Chapter 4 is PL OK.

--Óscar Durán
by oscaraduran
January 27th, 2021, 9:30 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

Colleen, Well done! The recordings are very clear and compelling. I especially liked the pace of the reading, as it heightened the action of the chase. The mistakes I noticed were mostly extra or missing connective words that did not change the meaning. The only exception to that is "the countr...
by oscaraduran
January 25th, 2021, 9:23 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

For GJConover, Here is what I noticed during my first listen of chapters 5 and 6. I understand that some of these may be deliberate interpretive choices and not errors. Since I cannot read minds, I simply list my observations and leave it up to you to ignore or correct as you see fit. If there is so...
by oscaraduran
January 16th, 2021, 12:49 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

John,
Good job again. My only complaint is that this story has a rather pat, Hollywood ending, but that is the author's doing.

Chapter 11
No errors found.

Chapter 12
Just one tiny flaw,
0:44 a stutter at the word "instinctively".

--Óscar Durán
by oscaraduran
January 9th, 2021, 6:16 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

Chapter 2 I liked the way the accents were interpreted. The characters' way of speaking comes through, and is easily understood. I only found two minor errors with the recording. 12:28 The word "and" instead of "or" changes the meaning of the sentence. The spy cannot have both de...
by oscaraduran
January 8th, 2021, 10:01 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: Complete [Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag
Replies: 58
Views: 2591

Re: ~[Adventure]-The Northern Spy by J.Thomas Warren-ag

I would like to offer to proof-listen, if you do not have someone else already.
--Oscar