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by adrianstephens
March 25th, 2024, 3:32 am
Forum: Readers Wanted: Dramatic Works
Topic: OPEN (DR) The Story of The Treasure Seekers (dramatic version)- rr
Replies: 230
Views: 27148

Re: OPEN (DR) The Story of The Treasure Seekers (dramatic version)- rr

H.O Chapter 1 sounds good except for one point: Did the H.O reader have to read the lines in color below, because they're not there. Otherwise, it's PL OK. But he told me afterwards he had been dreaming that they really _had_ come to eat H. O., and it couldn’t have been the pudding, when you come t...
by adrianstephens
March 18th, 2024, 6:54 am
Forum: Readers Wanted: Dramatic Works
Topic: OPEN[Play]Don Caesar de Bazan by D'Ernnery and Dumanoir - thw
Replies: 55
Views: 1287

Re: OPEN[Play]Don Caesar de Bazan by D'Ernnery and Dumanoir - thw

Hello Adrian, So good to hear your voice again! PL Okay for Don Jose, Act 1. In Act 2 at :13 please change "Yes: you know how she..." to "Yes: how well she..." Act 2 at :26 please omit the first "her" in "...the one for which {her} nature intended her." Act 2...
by adrianstephens
March 18th, 2024, 6:40 am
Forum: Readers Wanted: Short Works (Poetry & Prose)
Topic: [Poetry] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo
Replies: 127
Views: 3758

Re: [Poetry] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_27_melville_128kb.mp3 1:31 https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_28_melville_128kb.mp3 2:45 1 PL note for section 28: at 0.30 text is And dooms by a far decree but I hear degree otherwise OK! and very dramatically rea...
by adrianstephens
March 9th, 2024, 7:27 am
Forum: Readers Wanted: Short Works (Poetry & Prose)
Topic: [Poetry] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo
Replies: 127
Views: 3758

Re: [Poetry] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo

Hi Adrian Just 1 PL note: at 1.10 the text is But up and up each linking troop but I hear up and down otherwise OK! Oops. Here's the correction: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_25_melville_128kb.mp3 And section 26: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepie...
by adrianstephens
March 8th, 2024, 10:09 am
Forum: Readers Wanted: Short Works (Poetry & Prose)
Topic: [Poetry] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo
Replies: 127
Views: 3758

Re: [Poetry] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo

Hi Adrian, Thanks so much for your advice and instructions. Juliana You're very welcome, Juliana. But I do want to respectfully correct you, or at least correct an impression. None of us are going to give you instructions. Instead, we give you information that you can use to create an acceptable (i...
by adrianstephens
March 8th, 2024, 9:35 am
Forum: Readers Wanted: Short Works (Poetry & Prose)
Topic: [Poetry] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo
Replies: 127
Views: 3758

Re: [Poetry] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo

Sorry! Do I need to re-record the poem? Or just edit? Thanks, Juliana I hope Alan won't mind my jumping in to answer this. You edit just the parts that need to be corrected. The reason is that Alan, as the dedicated proof listener (DPL) has already invested time into listening critically to your re...
by adrianstephens
March 7th, 2024, 7:29 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE [Weekly Poetry] The Apartment House by Joyce Kilmer - dl
Replies: 46
Views: 957

Re: [Weekly Poetry] The Apartment House by Joyce Kilmer - dl

Good morning! This is my first ever reading. :) Length 1:10. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks! Natalie Fortier https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartment_house_kilmer_ncf_128kb.mp3 Dear Natalie, This is a good recording. I love the way you find a word to pivot on, it takes the stress...