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Stage Directions act 5 extra lines https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_stagedirections_5_extra.mp3 Hi Inkell I have uploaded the missing lines as a separate file, I have marked it Ready for PL but I think you can probably use it straight away. I see that Algy has provided the missing Domi...

I have just finished assembling a rough draft of act 5 and I noticed there is three missing lines- Domingo: 'Tis wonderful Stage direction: King (sits down, and leans his head on his arm). Stage direction: [A silence. I would probably cut the second stage direction of silence anyway and replace it ...

And one more: https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/harlotshouse_wilde_aps_128kb.mp3 2:04

Here's mine: https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/cannockchase_ingelow_aps_128kb.mp3 1:21

ToddHW wrote: ↑June 14th, 2024, 1:27 pm Acts 3 and 4 assembled. Not yet ready for final PL - I'll get to listen to it as I groom it for that PL.

Thanks, Todd

Thank you, Todd. I'll wait until it shows up ready for PL in the magic window.

Regards,
Adrian

Stage Directions for Act 5 are Ready for PL! https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_stagedirections_5.mp3 21.54 PL Notes 4:05 missing direction "He stops short" - although this might be unnecessary given the acting by Marquis. 5.36 "through the grating" should be "th...

Stage Directions for Act 5 are Ready for PL! https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_stagedirections_5.mp3 21.54 Thank you, Alan. Nicely read, as always. PL Notes 4:05 missing direction "He stops short" - although this might be unnecessary given the acting by Marquis. 5.36 "thr...

Hello! Finally back from my travels, and I have uploaded the revised Syra: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_syra_4.mp3 It's now 5:17. Thanks so much for all the helpful advice about audio recording in my noisy urban environment... I keep learning new things here all the time....

Thank you, Inkell. If I squint hard enough, you are definitely a 3-year-old :0). PL Notes 21s "and mother weeps" should be "and my mother weeps" Regards, Adrian Here is the correction: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_infanta_4.mp3 Thank you, Inkell. PL OK. Regards,...

Hi Inkell I think there are several places where act 4 could be split, I would suggest between scenes 12 & 13 so each half would have 12 scenes. But I suggest you decide on that when you start assembling. I will provide extra intro/outros when you have decided. It would be helpful if you read t...

Stage Directions for Act 4 revised https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_stagedirections_4.mp3 31.58 Hi Adrian and David I have marked Mercado as PL OK! as I don't think the minor mis-read is significant. :thumbs: We now have everything needed for Act 5 except the Stage Directions which I w...

Here is section 11 - Don Louis Mercado act 5... https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_mercado_5.mp3 2:12 Hello David, A short part, but nicely read. There is one observation, which is optional as it doesn't change the meaning. I'll await your response before marking PL Notes or PL OK. 45s: ...

Stage Directions for Act 4 are Ready for PL! https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_stagedirections_4.mp3 31.58 Hello Alan, Nicely read, as always. PL Notes (optional) 12:12 "king reads through it" s/b "... reads it through" I'll wait on your response before marking PL OK...

Thank you Inkell, Read very nicely. PL Notes At 9:56 there's a repetition of "Say, can I see the King?". I should imagine you are experimenting with recording "from without". Anyhow, either is acceptable, please delete one. At 12:56 "... advised by design, he may have faith...

Thanks, Adrian! I forgot to mention the experimenting with the "from without" and I wasn't sure which I preferred, do you have a preference on which you think sounds better/more fitting? I will fix the other corrections soon Hello Inkell, I'm normally pretty close to the mic. For "fr...