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by kawatara
June 3rd, 2019, 8:16 am
Forum: Readers Found
Topic: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck
Replies: 112
Views: 3098

Re: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck

I made this recording but I had a hard time editing it. I did multiple takes on multiple occasions. My audio setup isn't working out well. https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/seastories_33_hardy_128kb.mp3 (9:00) It may be better that someone else take over this chapter. It sounds fine to me and ha...
by kawatara
April 18th, 2019, 2:53 pm
Forum: Going Solo
Topic: [SOLO] The Book of Jubilees by Robert Charles - annise
Replies: 33
Views: 1015

Re: [SOLO] The Book of Jubilees by Robert Charles - annise

Chapters 3, 4,and 5 are PL OK!
Ethan
by kawatara
April 13th, 2019, 9:36 am
Forum: Readers Found
Topic: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck
Replies: 112
Views: 3098

Re: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck

Sections 13 and 14 are PL OK!
Ethan
by kawatara
April 3rd, 2019, 4:25 pm
Forum: Readers Found
Topic: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck
Replies: 112
Views: 3098

Re: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck

PL Notes for Chapter 10
I absolutely love your whale and coral stars voice!!! :D They really bring the story to life
The only note I have is to add the title "A Coral Parable" to the outro
Thank you
Ethan
by kawatara
April 3rd, 2019, 4:20 pm
Forum: Readers Found
Topic: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck
Replies: 112
Views: 3098

Re: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck

PL Notes for Chapter 9
YOU REMEMBERED THE S!! :D :D
The only note I have is to add "Among the Coral Trees" to the Outro
Ethan
by kawatara
April 3rd, 2019, 4:13 pm
Forum: Readers Found
Topic: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck
Replies: 112
Views: 3098

Re: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck

PL Notes for Chapter 8
Again, A. S. Hardy
There is an awkward pause at 1:04
Add the title "Sea Anemones" to the outro
Thank you
Ethan
by kawatara
April 3rd, 2019, 4:03 pm
Forum: Readers Found
Topic: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck
Replies: 112
Views: 3098

Re: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck

PL Notes for Chapter 7
For the intro, the author's name is Ms. A.S Hardy
There are several awkward pauses at 1:17, 2:30, and 2:35. Shorten the length of the pauses a between the sentences a little and the recording will flow much better.
Include the title "Jellyfish" in the outro.
Thank you
Ethan
by kawatara
March 31st, 2019, 12:37 pm
Forum: Readers Found
Topic: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck
Replies: 112
Views: 3098

Re: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck

PL notes for section 34 For future reference, the intro should end with only the title of the chapter. Carolin can determine whether you should edit the intro or not. The recording should end with the title of the chapter, not the number. Also, please post the length of the recording with the link t...
by kawatara
March 21st, 2019, 1:04 pm
Forum: Readers Found
Topic: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck
Replies: 112
Views: 3098

Re: [group] Sea Stories for Wonder Eyes by Mrs AS Hardy -ck

Section 11 is PL OK! Nothing in the recording is distracting.
Ethan