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I think I will be accurate for what concern poetry, because as Kevin suggested, over there is also important the sound and the rithm of the words. For all the parts like introduction and such, I will probably be a little more "standard". Please do not refrain from pointing out to me if you think I'm...

TO LUIGI DEL RICCIO:

8th line May --> Must
11th line That --> Thus

You are really good Kevin. Indeed.

Emanuela

Now it's perfect!
Thank you Kevin.

Emanuela

And also Sec 32 is PL Ok!

We're really almost there!!!

Emanuela

I LOVE the way you pronounce "Michelangelo".
You spell it quite well, and leave there a taste of non-italian language that makes me savour it.

I can't wait to hear the poems...

Emanuela

Question to Kevin and Michael: Kevin in you preface at 1:15 you read "frequently" (I think) instead of "freely" (16th line of page 1). For the required standard of PL is to be changed or not? I'm just trying to understand how much I have to be pernickety, because I've been that a lot, perhaps too mu...

Hallo
I'm here alive and almost kicking.
I do not know where to look if I'm listed somewhere as DPL.

But I will start immediately to listen to the first section.
Can't wait.

Emanuela

Thank you Pier
here my revised reading
I changed all your suggestions

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/dialogomassimisistemi_55_galilei_128kb.mp3
(now 36:23)

Emanuela

Thank you Pier!! Now.. Sec.32 suggestions. We have some different things to take care of in this sections. 9:49 pag 248, 16 lines to bottom: “si muovono in cerchi” instead of “si muovon in cerchi” 14:26 pag 249, 5 lines to bottom: “ma ci resta” instead of “ma si resta” 18:21 pag 251, 1st line: “senz...

Now, please, let me indulge in a little bit of explanation. After the power of Love (for Galielo oc) comes the power of the Snails… I summoned bad weather, so I was able to close the windows, then, shame on me, I threatened family, yelling “NO SILENCE, NO DINNER PREPARED FOR 1 MONTH!” This is the re...

And the section 31 is PL Ok!!
Thank you Pier!

Emanuela

Now for the suggestions of sect. 31 - Giornata seconda, parte diciassettesima: 1:45 p.239 12 lines from top: "segnano perpendicolo" instead of "segnano il perpendicolo" 6:10 p.239 16 lines to bottom: "che si trattengono per l’aria" instead of "che si trattengono per aria" 7:16 p.239 3 lines to botto...

The checker had a green "passed"
But I preferred to ask, since I'm a noob proof-listener .

Emanuela

And section 30 is now PL ok
The volume is now 91.5dB, I take that this much is ok.

Thank you Pier.

Emanuela

I'm missing 3 pages of reading, and I did the reviewing of the ones I already read. Unfortunately, I miss the time to read. Reviewing you sections is easier since I just have to listen and read: no need to close the windows, and if family is here around doing every kind of rumor, I do not care. Reco...