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by eidolo
August 17th, 2018, 9:01 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE The Houses of Sin by Vincent O'Sullivan -ck
Replies: 91
Views: 4481

Re: ~[poetry] The Houses of Sin by Vincent O'Sullivan -ck

Truthfully, your recording needs to be done over again and you need to slow down. Did you listen to the link that I sent you of Nemo's recording? A poem is meant to rhyme and that rhyming is meant in most poems to be featured. If you are reading fast, then you totally miss the purpose of the poem a...
by eidolo
August 17th, 2018, 8:40 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE The Houses of Sin by Vincent O'Sullivan -ck
Replies: 91
Views: 4481

Re: ~[poetry] The Houses of Sin by Vincent O'Sullivan -ck

Next, listening to your recording, you are speaking very fast! I would suggest slowing down a bit :) You need to make a slight pause at the end of each line please. Right now everything in a verse runs together and it is fairly hard to listen to and comprehend. As for the beginning, you said "read ...
by eidolo
August 17th, 2018, 7:28 pm
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE The Houses of Sin by Vincent O'Sullivan -ck
Replies: 91
Views: 4481

Re: ~[poetry] The Houses of Sin by Vincent O'Sullivan -ck

Here's one. Tell me if it's too dramatic. I wasn't trying to be. Just trying to put feeling into it. I need to know what sucks so I don't mess up all my other recordings I have in line. Thank you.

Click here.
by eidolo
August 16th, 2018, 10:19 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE The Houses of Sin by Vincent O'Sullivan -ck
Replies: 91
Views: 4481

Re: ~[poetry] The Houses of Sin by Vincent O'Sullivan -ck

You are welcome to read those sections. To be able to sign you up, i need to know under which name or pseudonym you would like to appear in the catalog. We can also link to your personal website or blog. I'd like to use the name 'Tanya B'. Also, one quick question. Are there any words that come aft...
by eidolo
August 15th, 2018, 9:53 am
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE Harper's Young People, Issue 14-mas
Replies: 62
Views: 4262

Re: [GROUP] Harper's Young People, Issue 14-mas

May I have section 11?