COMPLETE [Mystic Philosphy] The Initiates of the Flame by Manly P. Hall - rr
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I plan to redo the first ones I submitted. I did a couple short sections of another project and got some feedback on some items I need to correct. (Noise reduction, who knew....)
Before harming your ears by listening to these, please allow me to make some corrections.
I will repost once I have updated corrected ones.
Before harming your ears by listening to these, please allow me to make some corrections.
I will repost once I have updated corrected ones.
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Uploaded corrected versions. of sections 0, 1, and 2.
Hello! Thanks for the updates. I'll start listening to your recordings within the next few days and will provide any feedback as needed. Have a great day!
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
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The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Sections 0 and 1 are both PL OK. Very nicely read. I enjoy your tone of voice and your pacing.
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
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Thanks! This is my first attempt after being a listener since basically the start. Any tips are greatly appreciated.
Section 2 -nicely done! Very interesting about how the lotus transformed into the rose for symbolism.BrotherMichael wrote: ↑April 22nd, 2024, 1:46 pm Uploaded corrected versions. of sections 0, 1, and 2.
Just a few edits please:
Ending - slight shuffling sound right at the end of the recording (8:48). Perhaps you can replace that with another second of complete silence.
Around 6:28 - stumble on "and only when he sends upward nourishment..."
Around 4:50 - stumble on "and it is to this point in himself that the student is striving to rise."
Around 1:05 - stumble on "said to have lived high on the top of a mountain."
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Section 3 is PL OK!
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Section 4 - Two edits please:
Around 6:02 - stumble on "...temple at Karnac have long been dead,"
Around 3:20 - heard "The symbol of the ancient Egyptian carried with it..." should be "The apron of the ancient Egyptian carried with it..."
Around 6:02 - stumble on "...temple at Karnac have long been dead,"
Around 3:20 - heard "The symbol of the ancient Egyptian carried with it..." should be "The apron of the ancient Egyptian carried with it..."
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Section 5 is PL OK!
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Section 6 is PL OK!
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Section 7 is PL OK!
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
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Revised. Let me know if this works, or if you think I should just redo them from scratch.
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/initiatesoftheflame_02_hall_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/initiatesoftheflame_04_hall_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/initiatesoftheflame_02_hall_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/initiatesoftheflame_04_hall_128kb.mp3
It's pretty rare recordings need to be completely redone. And it's expected it'll sound slightly different with any edits. I've yet to figure out how to modulate my voice to sound exactly the same all the time lolBrotherMichael wrote: ↑May 1st, 2024, 6:30 am Revised. Let me know if this works, or if you think I should just redo them from scratch.
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/initiatesoftheflame_02_hall_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/initiatesoftheflame_04_hall_128kb.mp3
I'll listen to these this evening and provide any feedback.
Friendly reminder - when you're doing a solo or you're BC for a a group project, if someone submits edits, you'll just want to change the status in the MW to "Ready for Spot Check". Your DPL (proof listener) can quickly see that the updates have been received and are ready for review. No worries for this time. I made that change for you for these files.
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America